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So I've recently become obsessed with the haiku...

Post by Moonlight on Tue Oct 16, 2012 9:39 pm

This explains itself.
Feel free to add what you want.
Here are some of mine:

I feel so alone.
They all just go passing by
Without a hello.

Tell me who I am.
I've forgotten why I'm here.
What is my purpose?

I just want to live.
It's not really much to ask.
Why is it so hard?

Be quiet now, fool.
You repeat once spoken words.
You know not their mean.

If I am to learn
On only what I am told,
Do I truly learn?

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Post by Sky Cloud on Tue Oct 16, 2012 9:40 pm

wow, those feels.......
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Post by Moonlight on Mon Oct 29, 2012 6:05 pm

Some more recent ones I wrote:

See the autumn leaves
Floating freely without care
I envy them so

Goodbye, my dear friend
I wish I could go with you
We will meet again

Remember these words
"Quoth the raven: 'Nevermore'"
Know your time has come

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Post by OneMoreDaySK on Tue Oct 30, 2012 12:18 am

If y'don't mind I'll be puttin' some stuff up here as well, since someone wished for me to stop simple rhymes over in 'Corrupt a Wish'. Very relaxing coming up with these.

Naught but a shadow
I wax and wane so slightly
On a windowsill

Gaze of tired eyes
The soul cries in empathy
Tia's Lullaby
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