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Post by Permafrost on Sun Apr 29, 2012 2:19 am

So my first poem that I made by choice...so...yea...

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Oh Chrysalis
You are my queen
Your the most beautiful thing
I've ever seen.
I feel your pain,
I feel your hate,
We belong together
There is no debate.
You and I
Can take back Canterlot.
We can take on the world
Just give me a shot.
We can take anything
Including Equestria
And no one will stop us
Not even Celestia.
Nothing in this world
Means more to me
Then a smile on your face
I do decree.
Oh Chrysalis
You know it's true
At the end of the day
I really love you.
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Post by Tia on Sun Apr 29, 2012 9:21 am

nice poem

i know you love chrysalis but i can let you two take over equestria

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Post by Scootaloo on Sun Apr 29, 2012 5:18 pm

Cute ^_^
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Post by Formis_Fluttergod on Sun Apr 29, 2012 6:07 pm

RainbowJJP wrote:nice poem

i know you love chrysalis but i can let you two take over equestria
Shouldn't there be "can't"? Derpy Hooves
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Post by Tia on Sun Apr 29, 2012 6:18 pm

Formis_Sage wrote:
RainbowJJP wrote:nice poem

i know you love chrysalis but i can let you two take over equestria
Shouldn't there be "can't"? Derpy Hooves

yes that should be can't, stupid iphone autocorrect

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Post by Permafrost on Sun Apr 29, 2012 7:07 pm

RainbowJJP wrote:
Formis_Sage wrote:
RainbowJJP wrote:nice poem

i know you love chrysalis but i can let you two take over equestria
Shouldn't there be "can't"? Derpy Hooves

yes that should be can't, stupid iphone autocorrect

Awww...oh well...I wasn't really expecting to take over unoppossed anyways...
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Re: DM's first poem (a Chrysalis poem #1)

Post by bigmikem2000 on Mon Apr 30, 2012 12:00 am

dude... u crazy
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Re: DM's first poem (a Chrysalis poem #1)

Post by Permafrost on Mon Apr 30, 2012 12:45 am

bigmikem2000 wrote:dude... u crazy

Dare I ask why?
Though I can think of many reasons...
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Post by bigmikem2000 on Mon Apr 30, 2012 12:52 am

all u think about is a wierd thing that looks like it has been shot
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Re: DM's first poem (a Chrysalis poem #1)

Post by Formis_Fluttergod on Mon Apr 30, 2012 5:25 am

bigmikem2000 wrote:all u think about is a wierd thing that looks like it has been shot
I don't mind that she's all he thinks about. What concerns me is that Ponies (and others) may get hurt because of his blind love (and her mind-control).
OOC: Yes, let's drag our little game into Forum threads. >:D
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Re: DM's first poem (a Chrysalis poem #1)

Post by Apple Crumble on Mon Apr 30, 2012 10:17 am

@FS Yes, Let's.

Love is in bloom. I really like it. ^^
Love is love i guess but no one will take equestria. Rage

On another note, if changelings feed off love, how do they love each other?
(mindblown)
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Post by Guest on Mon Apr 30, 2012 10:22 am

Good job on poem I love it

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Re: DM's first poem (a Chrysalis poem #1)

Post by Formis_Fluttergod on Mon Apr 30, 2012 10:36 am

Apple Crumble wrote:
On another note, if changelings feed off love, how do they love each other?
(mindblown)
Fluttershy found that out the simpliest of ways.

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