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DM's first poem (a Chrysalis poem #1)

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Post by Permafrost Sun Apr 29, 2012 2:19 am

So my first poem that I made by choice...so...yea...

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Post by Tia Sun Apr 29, 2012 9:21 am

nice poem

i know you love chrysalis but i can let you two take over equestria
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Post by Scootaloo Sun Apr 29, 2012 5:18 pm

Cute ^_^
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Post by Formis_Fluttergod Sun Apr 29, 2012 6:07 pm

RainbowJJP wrote:nice poem

i know you love chrysalis but i can let you two take over equestria
Shouldn't there be "can't"? Derpy Hooves
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Post by Tia Sun Apr 29, 2012 6:18 pm

Formis_Sage wrote:
RainbowJJP wrote:nice poem

i know you love chrysalis but i can let you two take over equestria
Shouldn't there be "can't"? Derpy Hooves

yes that should be can't, stupid iphone autocorrect
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Post by Permafrost Sun Apr 29, 2012 7:07 pm

RainbowJJP wrote:
Formis_Sage wrote:
RainbowJJP wrote:nice poem

i know you love chrysalis but i can let you two take over equestria
Shouldn't there be "can't"? Derpy Hooves

yes that should be can't, stupid iphone autocorrect

Awww...oh well...I wasn't really expecting to take over unoppossed anyways...
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Post by bigmikem2000 Mon Apr 30, 2012 12:00 am

dude... u crazy
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Post by Permafrost Mon Apr 30, 2012 12:45 am

bigmikem2000 wrote:dude... u crazy

Dare I ask why?
Though I can think of many reasons...
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Post by bigmikem2000 Mon Apr 30, 2012 12:52 am

all u think about is a wierd thing that looks like it has been shot
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Post by Formis_Fluttergod Mon Apr 30, 2012 5:25 am

bigmikem2000 wrote:all u think about is a wierd thing that looks like it has been shot
I don't mind that she's all he thinks about. What concerns me is that Ponies (and others) may get hurt because of his blind love (and her mind-control).
OOC: Yes, let's drag our little game into Forum threads. >:D
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Post by Apple Crumble Mon Apr 30, 2012 10:17 am

@FS Yes, Let's.

Love is in bloom. I really like it. ^^
Love is love i guess but no one will take equestria. Rage

On another note, if changelings feed off love, how do they love each other?
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Post by Guest Mon Apr 30, 2012 10:22 am

Good job on poem I love it

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Post by Formis_Fluttergod Mon Apr 30, 2012 10:36 am

Apple Crumble wrote:
On another note, if changelings feed off love, how do they love each other?
(mindblown)
Fluttershy found that out the simpliest of ways.

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