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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.
by CamoBadger Mon May 13, 2013 2:47 pm
@Combat: I'm not good at combat sequences myself and don't write too many of them up myself, so I can't really give an opinion on how to improve there.
@Crimson's Character: Honestly you can't really change it. There are plenty of things I like about him, but it's in his character to be cocky and pretty impulsive (at least from what I've seen), so the things about him that tend to annoy me are just a part of who he is. It's not that I hate him as a character, but some of the things he does do annoy me pretty badly.
@Crimson's Character: Honestly you can't really change it. There are plenty of things I like about him, but it's in his character to be cocky and pretty impulsive (at least from what I've seen), so the things about him that tend to annoy me are just a part of who he is. It's not that I hate him as a character, but some of the things he does do annoy me pretty badly.
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.
by Kippershy Tue May 14, 2013 5:45 am
Haha, love it swicked, thank you.
on my phone at the moment so no indepth reply right now, but once im home I will.
thank you, really. Made me laugh and smile a lot.
I so badly need to hurry up and rewrite my shit so its readable both in content and presentation.
Edit: for the record, I've since removed the rape thing from the enclave fight because I realised it was unnecessary.
It was grimderp for the sake of trying to make things tense but in reality, severe threat without that works plenty. I think I changed it to something like either de-horning her or gauging out her eyes (as a threat.)
Still grim, but not quite as bad.
on my phone at the moment so no indepth reply right now, but once im home I will.
thank you, really. Made me laugh and smile a lot.
I so badly need to hurry up and rewrite my shit so its readable both in content and presentation.
Edit: for the record, I've since removed the rape thing from the enclave fight because I realised it was unnecessary.
It was grimderp for the sake of trying to make things tense but in reality, severe threat without that works plenty. I think I changed it to something like either de-horning her or gauging out her eyes (as a threat.)
Still grim, but not quite as bad.
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.
by Kippershy Tue May 14, 2013 9:24 am
swicked wrote:
Starting again slow, okay? Okay!
Now, what do I remember about this fic...
Crimson is a showboating horn dog that likes to punch old mares, Cherry is his special ops mff, Macy is their pet manticore who also has a thing for Crimson, Cherry also has a radbit whose whole family was brutally murdered by Crimson in an absolute slaughter and, if it's a she, will inevitably have a thing for Crimson despite this fact and they've got a baby they've left for Crimson's mom to raise like so many high school couples.
Of course, the baby is a mare, she will likely develop a thing for Crimson as well, which (since they're not related) will be okay, but hey, at least his mom's safe.
...probably.
Oh, and there was some form of plot. Something about alicorns and militarizing peaceful settlements...
I've lost it.
Gonna start anyway! Woo!
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"TRYING TO EAT ME!"
Ahem
'Tis a lie! Thine hindquarters remain ungobbled!
*snicker*Probably some form of satanic ritual. Certainly."Why can't I move Titan? What's going on!?"Ghoul: Actually, I'm the witchdoctor."I'll explain later, right now you need to clam down and not hurt the medical staff."
"You mean the ghoul."
"The nurse."
"Ghoul nurse."
*pulls out a shrunken head*
Ghoul: This is the nurse.
Head: Yo.Nurse: Yeah, I was around when the bombs fell, so I'm willing to bet I've seen more than you'd see in three lifetimes, jerk."Hey, when you've seen what I have, you have the right to be a bigot."
...although, honestly, I doubt any of the ghouls aren't guilty of similar thoughts from time to time. Smoothies are... unpleasant.Ah, right. Water.What an interesting tale this had turned out to be already, all I wanted was a water talisman.
It's always water.Y’see, there's this thing called a poker face.Eyeing him, I spoke slowly and cautiously. "How the hell did you know?"
You don't have one....like what? Poop?It was obvious that they'd tried to keep the place clean, though both time and inability reduced its cleanliness with subtle brown stains in the corners. I could only hope those stains were dried in blood like I'd assumed and nothing else.
You think they poop in the corners of their patients' rooms?
What in the heck could you imagine it'd be?!I don't remember that nickname at all."Why are you crying, Wingsy?
" weakening the enemies infrastructure. " enemies'Is that the zebra group referred to earlier?If we're going to take down the D-Z-C, we're going to need to take their weapons from them and give them to ourselves.
...yes. Yes, it was. Pretty sure.Depends on the structure."Auh, let me finish. The top pony is a figurehead, a pony in charge to turn to in times of need, be it to blame or to seek deliverance. The middle is where the power is."
One could argue if the goddesses or Caesar had died, their respective sides would fall apart into infighting. That's what happens when you take off the head.
Your uneducated assumption about a decentralized command structure is just that... uneducated.Nothing truly strong can be defeated in a single blow. Like in martial arts or, really, any kind of fighting... the best strategy is to get your foe off-balance before swinging your killing blow."If you died, the uprising would still continue if it was the true desire of the pones. Perhaps it would be stunted, but a new leader would be found. Somepony would show the courage and qualities of leadership and they would be made the new leader. For as long as the need exists, it will be filled sooner or later."
Plus, even if the leader's a figurehead, it can be devastating from a propaganda point of view.
Do you honestly think Filly would survive Red Eye and Stern being killed in a single swoop? Yes, they'd eventually find a new, powerful leader... but the infighting would go on for years and progress would grind to a halt in the meantime.
"with an embrace only a pony as magnificently big as her could do." As she could do.Yeah, no."I desire love and admiration. If that seems strange to you, so be it."
It's because it's Crimson, Titan.Crimson: ...have you been sitting there the entire time?"Goodnight."
I heard the nurse from earlier reply to me. "Seep well, Mr. Wings."
Nurse: Yes. I mean, I was nuked over two hundred years ago and not so much as a throb since then, but looking at you now... oh my.
Crimson: ...I miss thinking you just wanted to eat me.
Nurse: Who said I don’t? ;)
As much as I'd love to Crimson to get twice traumatized by ghouls... probably not a good idea :P
Oh, and "Seep"If I recall correctly, the Caesar was the glue that held the tribes together. He was also the instigator of the war in the first place due to his unwillingness to seem weak.I always assumed that if we took out the Caesar, the war would be won. That if Celestia and Luna were to fall, all would be lost."
More than likely, if he (and one or two backups) were removed from power, some of the tribes would have left the fight or tried to sue for peace.
Infighting, most assuredly. Not enough to win the war by itself, but enough of an advantage to have a chance.
If Celestia fell, though... she wasn't in power. The war would have intensified. If Luna fell, the war would intensify further, the ponies had a decentralized command structure via the six ministries, which were THEMSELVES decentralized. The loss of any given one of them would have made the others fight harder but, as stated in PH, if they all LEFT their positions... that would definitely cause enough chaos, doubt and negative propaganda for the zebra to potentially win.
...basically, to wrap-up, knowing HOW an organization is set up is critical to knowing how to take it down. There is never just one answer.The scouts are for generally speaking to the public? What?"We're going to be travelling with a compliment of scouts, for your protection somewhat and for generally speaking to the public.I love that movie.">Please reactivate Project Iron Giant"...so, what, there’re no mares in their ranks?Terrified mothers see them as monsters who they bow to in hopes of avoiding being hurt or worse. All the while, horrified fathers are left with no option but to join their ranks or ultimately support them in some other way, lest they wish to be those who live in West Slumside and fail their families.
You've also identified, here, that many of their ranks don't want to be a part of this. Will there be some effort to minimize casualties, then?
Or will you be just as monstrous?I forget, can everyone in special ops do that? I ask because Twilight couldn't figure it out herself and Trixie did due to her own specialty in general magic and illusion spells, so the spell's kinda a big deal. So much so that significant amounts of bits were put into developing not just the original stealth buck, but the stealth buck mark 2.As he spoke, my magic encased me in a stealth cloak, removing me from sight.
Not that it matters at this point; she has the spell, either way.Yeah, at least give us a layout of the place. Depending on the architecture it might be possible to bait them into an ambush and crossfire or try to infiltrate their ranks and take out some key targets prior to an open exchange.Really? Really? He was going to try and organize an uprising and new government like this? I facehooved.
"or make the everypony scatter." make everyponyNot okay! She just made a play that WILL be affecting their strategy and is keeping it under wraps despite the fact that the point of this meeting is to form a joint decision!"Sorry Titan, but some things just gotta be kept as they are."...I don't think so. Your supplies are important. Better to try and take some from the enemy, otherwise you're starving yourself before the main event."Generally we go out, speak to the ponies topside. We find out what they need most and what's been happening."
"Uh huh, what else?"
"If we have the supplies? We do what we can. Otherwise we apologize and go to the next lot."
An army marches on its stomach, after all.Kay, so that's what they're doing! Yay!"That's the wrong approach there, then. We're going to need to stick with the ponies, get them the supplies from the DZC and give it to the ponies."Depends on the method. Some means have no countermeasures."If we need to? Yes. You say your forces are strong at guerilla tactics? We ambush the enemy convoys as they move or we make hit and run on their stockpiles, keeping the method of attack and approach changed up each and every time if we can help it, because the moment we get lazy and follow through with the same method for the third time in a row is when they start to shore their defenses from that type of attack."
I mean, IEDs are pretty much always effective.
I think I’m just splitting hairs here, though....more than kinda two entirely different skill sets, there, Cherry :PThis pony was war material, leadership of a unit or perhaps even an army, but I couldn't imagine him leading a city.
“Titans low voice”Kay, so, the radbit is male.Prince Snugglebums is a radbit."
Nevermind what I said at the start of this review...
...Prise. Angels of the sky? Gave birth to the princesses?
Kind of... nevermind, I don’t know.
...hmm. Another rape attempt.
...and, instead of moving quickly and taking them out silently, she screams at the top of her lungs.
But eh, she had a close call, as I recall.She was alone to begin with and your friend is dead because of it. Plus, she’s a unicorn, “no gun” is a very temporary state of being."You're all alone now, bitch. No gun to use on me, what you gonna do?"This guy is thoroughly undisciplined and doing little but raging at you like a pro wrestler. Aren’t you special ops something or other?Once more the buck charged me and stamped his hooves into my chest, I doubled over in pain and he knocked me onto my front.Eh, that’s a bit better.I rolled onto my back and magically pulled my knife out from my armour and lodged it deep into his throat.Sigh... objection mostly-rescinded.You've been trained excellently in hoof to hoof."
"Yeah? Well I never was too brilliant at it. It's why I keep my range, something I'm a lot more confident with."So, this guy’s never heard of a pyrrhic victory?End of the fight, you win or you lose, and you came out physically hurt but not molested nor the loser."
"So fighting is just about who wins and loses to you?"
"I'm not sure. Just understand that you did well, okay?"
"Okay."
That bodes pretty badly for their futures. She’s probably the best sharpshooter they have and she got injured in a brawl. This is far from optimal... it’s a good thing the “real” battle isn’t for over a week.
And done! Not bad, not bad... still getting my bearings. Enough for now, though.
Good job, Kipper, and I hope most of this is still relevant since I was working against my old downloaded copy. Whatever, it’ll be the newest-ish stuff from now on.
Gonna have to get used to the characters again. They all share one big trait of yours... they like to throw their emotions around. Let it drive not just their resolve, but dictate their actions entirely. Just bullheaded at times. It’s something that clashes with my own personality, not that that’s a bad thing.
But yeah, until next time, something wicked review: complete!
Again, I'm really glad to see another review from you. Made me smile a lot and I really, really do appreciate your reviews.
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Crimson showboating? *Gasps* never! He just.. uh... takes pride in himself! Yes, pride!
As for how easily he gets laid, lololool, well, all part of being exotic and friendly with a pinch of charm and know-how. But yeah, I know you're not complaining and I'm just playing along here.
I had to laugh at you mentioning the whole slaughtering of Prince Snugglebums family.
Also, don't worry, no incest (no matter how non blood related) is going to happen.
You are right with the plot you remember.
Crimson is after a new water talisman for the Stable and this leads him to yes, militarise a settlement without thinking too much about it. Though at the same time, he only does it for their own safety so it's not a bad thing, right?
And yes, there is "some" alicorn influence in the whole shebang. You'll learn more as it goes on.
So many spelling errors. Eugh. Really need to sort them out ASAP. Thanks for letting me know about those!
Once I get back to the rewrites, which I plan to rewrite chapter two before letting myself work on 21, I'll be putting the chapters through proof-readers before releasing them to avoid such mistakes.
Indeed, that was her internal feelings (the whole 3x what you've seen thing/jerk)
They understand after the apology but there would still be that "great, the bigot is here" feeling when they see him.
Speaking of poker faces.... I don't even remember which chapter, mind you.
Also thanks for pointing out my ever changing methods to put down DZC. I've done it so many times, put it with dots or like seen then, -'s.
Now I've decided I'm going to just put it as DZC.
But yes, DZC, Donkey Zebra Coalition.
On the topic of leadership: Very true, very true. At that moment, I was going for a very in character thing, rather than how it can work in the real world. Crimson knows leadership to be figure head at the top but the middle having the real control over the majority of things, sending only the more important and urgent decisions to the top while handling all the micromanagement for the leader.
It's how his Stable works and how he's always known leadership to be in larger cases, so it makes sense to him.
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Keen eye.
Titan was just a soldier, never a leader. His leadership capabilities are purely that of the battlefield and nothing more. He knows how to lead a squad through a firefight, he knows how to protect anyone under him and to keep others safe, but politics and anything akin to that was never his strong suit.
Him not knowing that either of the princesses dying would've pumped things up is because for himself, it would've felt like a loss so bad that he would've had to reconsider it all.
Cherry is the only pony (non alicorn) that I ever intend to give invisibility powers to.
The rest of the spec ops team... well, most of them are trained in stealth, in how to move swift and silent without leaving a trace if they can help it, but there are a few with big guns that aren't about stealth but about pure power and endurance.
Chosen for their capability to fight and carry on through the thick of it, sort've akin to Big Macintosh.
Cherry got her invisibility spell through always trying to make herself invisible because it's how she felt at times when she was younger.
Prise are angels of the skies, not having given birth to the princesses but they are the princesses, and all those who are like the princesses in terms of being alicorn/hugely powerful.
It's not something I've ever gone back to, something I'm not sure if I'll keep or scrap come the rewrite.
Anyway, it was supposed to be a reference to a comic series called The Amory Wars where there's a breed of guardian angels told by god that they have to protect the keywork (the universe) and The Crowing (the saviour).
They've got immense capabilities and since they're guardians, I thought maybe I could play a little lore into it all and say that Celestia/Luna was thought by some to be of this mythical race (of very few) sent to protect ponies for all of eternity.
...Really can't decide if I should keep it or remove it come the rewrite.
And again, again again again, thank you.
I'm glad you enjoyed it. There's a lot of things I fucked up on in the story and thus will change and improve when I rewrite it.
I think you're coming close to when I revamp my writing formatting style so you won't have to put up with that horrid mess for too much longer if you continue reading.
Thanks for dedicating the time to read my terrible story, and to give such amazing reviews!
Also, yeah, my characters are a lot like me in their emotions influencing them a lot. Without making them direct copies of me, I try to add a lot of my own essence (or, specific parts of it) into my characters for the more personal, realistic feel to them.
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.
by Kippershy Tue May 28, 2013 9:54 am
Just to let youlot know, i've begun work on the rewrite of chapter two as well as twenty one.
Gonna take a while with chapter two i think because i'm nervous about fucking up. Camo. I know it's unusual for me, but would you consider pre-reading content to make sure i don't fuck up horribly?
Gonna take a while with chapter two i think because i'm nervous about fucking up. Camo. I know it's unusual for me, but would you consider pre-reading content to make sure i don't fuck up horribly?
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.
by CamoBadger Tue May 28, 2013 12:00 pm
Sure, I'll happily do that for you.
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.
by Kippershy Tue May 28, 2013 12:09 pm
Thanks dude.
Would you rather see it in infancy with how the chapter is being rewritten or wait until I'm most of the way with it?
I can send you the link now, though I'm thinking of toning some stuff down if you do wanna see it early on so you can tell me before I go too far.
I'm just so nervous I'll mess it up and it won't have the same charm.
Would you rather see it in infancy with how the chapter is being rewritten or wait until I'm most of the way with it?
I can send you the link now, though I'm thinking of toning some stuff down if you do wanna see it early on so you can tell me before I go too far.
I'm just so nervous I'll mess it up and it won't have the same charm.
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.
by CamoBadger Tue May 28, 2013 12:18 pm
Whichever you think will help you more man.
And don't be nervous, I'm sure I'll love it either way.
And don't be nervous, I'm sure I'll love it either way.
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.
by Ketchup Tue May 28, 2013 3:21 pm
I could also pre-read it for you if you think my opinion may be of value.
I'll be re-reading BB to refresh after finishing the re-read of ATR, which I've only got one more chapter to get through.
I'll be re-reading BB to refresh after finishing the re-read of ATR, which I've only got one more chapter to get through.
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.
by Kippershy Tue May 28, 2013 3:40 pm
Actually, why not. It'll be good to have two people who know the character & their relationship.
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.
by Kippershy Tue Jun 04, 2013 5:46 pm
That moment when.. that feel when...
-You realise Cherry is older than Crimson
-That they will grow old together, deeply in love through the years
-Their love will make them inseparable (metaphorically)
-One of them will eventually die of old age before the other
-The term other half wasn't just a phrase meaning to be in a relationship, but rather a very literal sense of the other part of who they've become
-They will be missing a part of who they are without their lover
-They will wait out the rest of their days forever wishing they could be reunited if only for long enough to utter one more 'I love you'
-Only once their souls meet will they ever truly be whole again
That feel
-You realise Cherry is older than Crimson
-That they will grow old together, deeply in love through the years
-Their love will make them inseparable (metaphorically)
-One of them will eventually die of old age before the other
-The term other half wasn't just a phrase meaning to be in a relationship, but rather a very literal sense of the other part of who they've become
-They will be missing a part of who they are without their lover
-They will wait out the rest of their days forever wishing they could be reunited if only for long enough to utter one more 'I love you'
-Only once their souls meet will they ever truly be whole again
That feel
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.
by Kippershy Sat Jun 08, 2013 1:41 pm
So this time I actually have something new for anyone who checks the thread out.
No, unfortunately it isn't the revised chapter two...
Not yet anyway, though while I'm on that topic, that's 4.1k in now.
Nope, I've got this to show you.
No, unfortunately it isn't the revised chapter two...
Not yet anyway, though while I'm on that topic, that's 4.1k in now.
Nope, I've got this to show you.
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.
by Kippershy Sat Jun 08, 2013 3:00 pm
swicked wrote:That feel when you don't have proper feelingsKippershy wrote:That moment when.. that feel when...
-You realise Cherry is older than Crimson
-That they will grow old together, deeply in love through the years
-Their love will make them inseparable (metaphorically)
-One of them will eventually die of old age before the other
-The term other half wasn't just a phrase meaning to be in a relationship, but rather a very literal sense of the other part of who they've become
-They will be missing a part of who they are without their lover
-They will wait out the rest of their days forever wishing they could be reunited if only for long enough to utter one more 'I love you'
-Only once their souls meet will they ever truly be whole again
That feel
In any case, seriously, I only know one person more of a hopeless romantic than you are... though he directs that toward his actual (constantly failing) relationships, not an ideal one in his head, so I'm not sure who's really worse, here XD
For me, the reason I've turned to the relationship from my story is because what relationships I did have in the past were utterly horrible. I mean, I loved them when they were good (mainly because my undying hopeless romantic made me think things were utterly awesome regardless) but the way each has ended alongside my upbringing has been utterly devastating.
So... fanfic relationships it is for me to keep myself happy in the romance department for the time being.
Lot less pain when you control how it'll all turn out.
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.
by Admiral Stoic Rum Sat Jun 08, 2013 9:20 pm
I'm buzzed right now wanna get plastered when I get home anyone wanna play tf2 on normal mode when I get home?
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.
by Admiral Stoic Rum Sun Jun 09, 2013 12:14 am
Admiral Stoic Rum wrote:I'm buzzed right now wanna get plastered when I get home anyone wanna play tf2 on normal mode when I get home?
hahaha meant to put this in the chat thread.. on a mobile its hard to get the right ones
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.
by Plasticube Wed Jun 12, 2013 3:20 pm
Had some free time so i finally caught up with this story.
If everyone in the forum hadn't commented that it gets better after the first few chapters I probably would have stopped reading, but it does get better, keep up the good work :)
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Got a new laptop to replace the old broken one, working through my post unemployment art-block so nothing fancy
If everyone in the forum hadn't commented that it gets better after the first few chapters I probably would have stopped reading, but it does get better, keep up the good work :)
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.
by Ketchup Wed Jun 12, 2013 3:29 pm
Plasticube wrote:
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Very nice, I'm sure Kipper will love that.
Crimson is black, though I think I like the tan colour more.
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.
by Kippershy Wed Jun 12, 2013 5:16 pm
*Grabs Plasticube and hugs 'em so tight that they can't breathe and then only realises just before they pass out*
I have no way to describe how much I love this picture.
And I agree, Ketchup, Tan would have made a much better choice.
I've said it a few times elsewhere, that if I had the ability to go back and tell myself to redesign the colour scheme before I had all the pictures done, I would. Tan would've been the best looking option ever, by the looks of things.
God damn it. haha.
Seriously though. GHTGHVBNTJFWJRNHDVJURVJUJVMSJ
ALL OF MY HAPPINESS. I HAVE IT BACK NAO.
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I have no way to describe how much I love this picture.
And I agree, Ketchup, Tan would have made a much better choice.
I've said it a few times elsewhere, that if I had the ability to go back and tell myself to redesign the colour scheme before I had all the pictures done, I would. Tan would've been the best looking option ever, by the looks of things.
God damn it. haha.
Seriously though. GHTGHVBNTJFWJRNHDVJURVJUJVMSJ
ALL OF MY HAPPINESS. I HAVE IT BACK NAO.
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.
by Plasticube Wed Jun 12, 2013 7:03 pm
That was a mistake on my part, i picked a light gray shade for his coat, it turned out tan on that paper ._.
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.
by Kippershy Wed Jun 12, 2013 7:07 pm
Huh, strange how that kind've stuff happens. Still adore it to pieces, completely.
The helmet kind've reminds me of the ones in Kerbal Space Programme so that's an even bigger win right there.
Thank you for the picture =3
The helmet kind've reminds me of the ones in Kerbal Space Programme so that's an even bigger win right there.
Thank you for the picture =3
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.
by Kippershy Mon Jun 24, 2013 5:17 am
I've been way too slow with this... so I'm gonna throw it out here and here alone.
Anyone who wants to keep up with progress on chapter two, feel free to check it at any time. Currently around 5,450 words, planning to get some more done tomorrow.
I don't normally do this, but it's been so long without any new stuff and I'm getting that damn feeling of not doing enough, not giving enough and not having enough motivation because of that and the lack of feedback that comes with it.
So I'm not forcing anyone to read this prior to it's proper release, I'm just saying you can if you want.
Hopefully the idea of it being public motivates me to do it.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hZxy_XUVI8rHfJ9eosK7bjRHq01FwLCrq85V3h0Qg5A/edit
Anyone who wants to keep up with progress on chapter two, feel free to check it at any time. Currently around 5,450 words, planning to get some more done tomorrow.
I don't normally do this, but it's been so long without any new stuff and I'm getting that damn feeling of not doing enough, not giving enough and not having enough motivation because of that and the lack of feedback that comes with it.
So I'm not forcing anyone to read this prior to it's proper release, I'm just saying you can if you want.
Hopefully the idea of it being public motivates me to do it.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hZxy_XUVI8rHfJ9eosK7bjRHq01FwLCrq85V3h0Qg5A/edit
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.
by Kippershy Thu Jun 27, 2013 9:23 pm
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.
by Kippershy Thu Jun 27, 2013 10:55 pm
And now these two arrive too!
And now I got to sleep!
And now I got to sleep!
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.
by Kippershy Tue Jul 02, 2013 4:41 am
On a bad note, I've still got hardly any writing done because I've been constantly tired from work and feeling belugh.
On a good note, I've seen some unexpected positive comments that gave me a little bit of spirit back.
On an even better note... I have some spoiler art for chapter twenty two...
Be warned, this really is spoiler.
On a good note, I've seen some unexpected positive comments that gave me a little bit of spirit back.
On an even better note... I have some spoiler art for chapter twenty two...
Be warned, this really is spoiler.
- Spoiler:
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.
by CamoBadger Tue Jul 02, 2013 12:07 pm
Kippershy wrote:On a bad note, I've still got hardly any writing done because I've been constantly tired from work and feeling belugh.
On a good note, I've seen some unexpected positive comments that gave me a little bit of spirit back.
On an even better note... I have some spoiler art for chapter twenty two...
Be warned, this really is spoiler.Lol yissssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
- Spoiler:
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.
by Ketchup Tue Jul 02, 2013 4:44 pm
I'm just wondering how that's a spoiler. Hmm. Doesn't look very important.
But it's nice.
But it's nice.
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.
by Kippershy Tue Jul 02, 2013 4:55 pm
Ketchup wrote:I'm just wondering how that's a spoiler. Hmm. Doesn't look very important.
But it's nice.
Well, it's not really all that important, but...
- Spoiler:
- Oh come on! He's reading them bed time stories! Something THAT adorable that isn't released yet has gotta be in spoilers! I mean, just imagine them all tucked in bed, eager for Crimson to read them one or two foals tales simply because. And you know Eos would simply die for that kiss on the forehead when the story ends.
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.
by Ketchup Tue Jul 02, 2013 4:59 pm
Heh. In this case, yeah, I guess a spoiler is warranted.Kippershy wrote:Ketchup wrote:I'm just wondering how that's a spoiler. Hmm. Doesn't look very important.
But it's nice.
Well, it's not really all that important, but...
- Spoiler:
It's adorable, certainly.
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.
by Kippershy Thu Jul 11, 2013 6:22 pm
Anyone possibly wanna do me a favour like none other?
I'm pretty sure I added a part in the story where I had Cherry admit she's fancied Crimson since before chapter one, Camo thinks so too, but I can't find it. Anyone else remember if I added it in or not?
Is it just something I planned to add?
Anyone who finds it if I did add it in, will earn my undying love.
I'm pretty sure I added a part in the story where I had Cherry admit she's fancied Crimson since before chapter one, Camo thinks so too, but I can't find it. Anyone else remember if I added it in or not?
Is it just something I planned to add?
Anyone who finds it if I did add it in, will earn my undying love.
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