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Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.

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Post by Ketchup Thu Jul 11, 2013 7:01 pm

Bingo, I think. Chapter 16.
Spoiler:
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Post by Kippershy Thu Jul 11, 2013 7:05 pm

I FUCKING LOVE YOU.
YOU HAVE NO IDEA. I DO I DO I DOOOO.
<3 I seriously love you, Ketch.
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Post by Kippershy Thu Jul 11, 2013 7:16 pm

My fucking face when you did this for me Ketch:
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Post by Ketchup Thu Jul 11, 2013 7:23 pm

It's no big deal. If you ever want anything else along those lines done, I could do it for you. Or at all, really. I like helping authors.
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Post by Kippershy Thu Jul 11, 2013 7:26 pm

It just means a lot to me. I'm tired as all hell and the little things like these can really, really upset me and wind me up if I'm not 100% sure I added them in.
I was getting really worried that I had planned to, wanted to, but never done so, and my hour of searching got me nowhere.
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Post by Kippershy Mon Jul 15, 2013 2:51 pm

So, instead of working on the rewrite of chapter two... I just spent roughly two hours (5:25pm-7:35pm) writing a clop fic using Broken Bonds material (non canon) which knocked up a good 2,746 words. (2,757 according to Fimfic)
...All because the 4chan thread was saying they wanted/we need more FOE clop.



I've submitted it as a new story branch over on FF but of course, that'll take time before that goes online, if it even is accepted at first. (Which I don't see why it shouldn't be. Made sure to notch it up for what it is.)

And I know that I'm not allowed to link anyone to the G.doc publicly... but if anyone wants to see what I wrote, in all it's raw goodness, let me know.

The story is now live over on Fimfiction. While I probably shouldn't link it even still, you CAN easily find it by checking out my main story page - there'll be a link to it on the right as one of my other stories.
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Post by Kippershy Tue Jul 23, 2013 4:36 pm

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CHAPTER TWO REWRITTEN AND NOW RELEASED
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Post by Frost Tue Jul 23, 2013 4:40 pm

I shall read this chapter with the greatest of urgency!

so, prolly tonight sometime. I'm just not a very urgent person.
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Post by Kippershy Tue Jul 23, 2013 5:02 pm

I'm just excited to finally have it done.
Wrote 8k today.
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Post by Kippershy Sat Aug 10, 2013 2:58 pm

Good news, with the second clopisode written and released, I won't be split between trying to write chapter 21 (and horribly failing) and finishing off the threesome scene.
So I'll be focusing on the story proper next time I write... just gotta get myself back into the habit of writing more often and how it is to write Crimson in the latest chapters.
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Post by Kippershy Thu Aug 15, 2013 1:18 am

Fixed version I did by myself.
I feel so proud of myself.
 
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Post by Kippershy Thu Aug 15, 2013 12:26 pm

Thanks Swicked! I'm really glad you think so.
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Post by CamoBadger Sun Aug 18, 2013 12:19 am

how I see this story:
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Post by Kippershy Sun Aug 18, 2013 9:30 am

For you, Camo.
Bigger resolution version (4k: https://i.imgur.com/Ah3Imeo.png)
1080p version for backgrounds: (1920x1080: https://i.imgur.com/K94eTX9.png)

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Post by CamoBadger Sun Aug 18, 2013 12:20 pm

WAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
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Post by CamoBadger Wed Aug 21, 2013 2:10 pm

Just read the Ch.21 teaser.

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Post by Kippershy Wed Aug 21, 2013 2:54 pm

By the way, productive day 'in the office' today. 5,250 words written today.
Standing at 6,128 words total and I haven't finished the current scene of Crimson's yet.
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Camo:
In which way do you mean that? At least it's in character, right?
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Post by Kippershy Wed Aug 21, 2013 5:13 pm

Anyone able to guess what this is?
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Can't decide which version I like more.

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Keep in mind both are still missing some content, but yeah. Can't decide which I prefer.
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Post by CamoBadger Wed Aug 21, 2013 11:52 pm

Think I like the second one more, just because the fully opened gate looks better than the half-open one. It slightly irritates me, and I don't know why.
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Post by Kippershy Wed Sep 04, 2013 5:17 pm

So, I finally managed to get back to writing. I'm awful for this - leaving creative stuff for god knows how long because I'm feeling too shitty or hot to think I'm up to it.
I should reaaaaaaaaaally be asleep right now, but fuck it, you guys deserve me putting the extra effort in.
And I've got something for you: I'm going to make this chapter extra long to make up for how long I've not put a new one up for you.

...I mean, I'm not going to fluff it up just because, although there is a little bit of fluffing no doubt. It's just that I've wanted to go back to Cherry in this upcoming chapter and I'm already 9k in without even completing the Crimson segment yet, so unless I push back Cherry's segment for the next chapter and have it wholly be Crimson for this one, wholly Cherry with the next one...

Thoughts on the matter?
Would you rather see two chapters or one long chapter?
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Post by Kippershy Thu Sep 05, 2013 1:58 pm

Got chapter twenty one finally released. Sorry if it's horrible and sorry it doesn't have any Cherry.
Next chapter is an entirely Cherry chapter to make up for it!
I could've gone for a mega chapter, but I'm glad I didn't. Releasing a 10.8k chapter seemed a better idea and the blog responders agreed 3 - 0 on that matter.

Good news is the next chapters content is all planned because of this, meaning as long as I keep momentum and don't get lazy, it shouldn't be a hard chapter to write nor should it take too long before release.
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Post by CamoBadger Thu Sep 05, 2013 8:37 pm

You would.
You would release a new chapter when i'm out of town and cant read it for three days (only have phone for net)

Will read and review either sunday night or monday depending on tiredness level.
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Post by Kippershy Thu Sep 05, 2013 11:54 pm

*Hugs Camo's arm*
Sorry, I didn't mean to upset you...
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Post by CamoBadger Sun Sep 08, 2013 9:51 pm

Okay, home and have an hour before dinner is done. Reading now, review will take a while because on kindle
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Post by CamoBadger Sun Sep 08, 2013 10:51 pm

Okay, here we go!
chapter 21:
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Post by CamoBadger Sun Sep 08, 2013 10:53 pm

Also, I like Zimena, because stripeypone.
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Post by Kippershy Mon Sep 09, 2013 12:29 am

CamoBadger wrote:Okay, here we go!
chapter 21:
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Oh, and I knew you'd like Zimmy. Stripypone indeed, lol.
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Post by CamoBadger Mon Sep 09, 2013 1:37 am

@Hooah: actually this is the army version. Hoorah is Marines...you insult me by saying otherwise How 

And that all makes sense, thank ya kindly and great work on the chapter.
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Post by Katarn Mon Sep 09, 2013 1:44 am

Um..it's THAT important how you write down shout? I mean..it still will sound alike if you hear it.
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Post by CamoBadger Mon Sep 09, 2013 2:31 am

YES IT IS
You cannot imagine how many arguments have come from how that word is spelled
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