Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.
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I'll probably read it after school tomorrow, watching a Paper Mario 2 LP.
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Review now. I am, and have gotten, rather sick with the cold that goes around every year, so this one will probably be less thorough than any before it.
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As usual, I read the last bits of my last review to remember what was going on.
Clingy colt is adorable.
Good question. What could be happening here...
Admiral Pip's Rum. Hehe.
Yeah, Cherry was bound to get mad at that.
Storm seems to be obsessed with wings. This is interesting, and they'll probably get along just swell.
Wings: +1 Charisma.
Dat meaningful chapter title. He was a Steel Ranger too. Interesting.
Maybe they can rescue Pony Joe... or any plan will just fall apart and fail quite miserably.
Crimson? Well, he wouldn't do it willingly and he's not going anywhere. Also, blatant disobedience.
Oh no! The Coalition may have found the location of the rubble base!
And, less humorously, he lost a friend. Poor guy.
"Titan put his hoof on the bucks shoulder and nodded."
"buck's".
I like poker but I've never been good at it.
I wonder if the alicorns can read his hand from his mind.
Cherry has a chance for a flush. But that'll probably not resolve.
Or it shall. What a twist.
Cherry wine for the Cherry mare. What could possibly go wrong?
I wonder if Titan is any good at poker. Information looks like a valid betting material.
I wonder just how much booze they have.
Big question from the winner.
With a large answer.
Alcohol usually doesn't taste very good, so of course, Sandstorm wouldn't like it.
Suddenly it is go fish. He he.
And that is a bigger question. This could get messy.
Meh, looks like he didn't muck up. It was a really long answer, though.
"Where's the rum gone?"
Bestest bluff evar. A straight flush is almost the highest you can get, a royal straight flush is better.
I wonder just what has happened to the alicorns other than the whole Goddess bombing.
Err mah gerd. Acknowledgement of other fic being canon. Actually, not unexpected.
The Destroyer. Pfft.
History! Goody!
Iron Giant must be pretty important.
A large automaton, probably. The Iron Giant is the name of a movie that involved Lauren Faust, as you likely already know. Good movie, I watched it dozens of times growing up.
Re: footnote.
It wasn't boring at all, really. I kinda only skimmed the mushy parts between Crimson and Cherry, but they were interesting all the same.
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ketchup504 wrote:Review now. I am, and have gotten, rather sick with the cold that goes around every year, so this one will probably be less thorough than any before it.
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As usual, I read the last bits of my last review to remember what was going on.
Clingy colt is adorable.
Good question. What could be happening here...
Admiral Pip's Rum. Hehe.
Yeah, Cherry was bound to get mad at that.
Storm seems to be obsessed with wings. This is interesting, and they'll probably get along just swell.
Wings: +1 Charisma.
Dat meaningful chapter title. He was a Steel Ranger too. Interesting.
Maybe they can rescue Pony Joe... or any plan will just fall apart and fail quite miserably.
Crimson? Well, he wouldn't do it willingly and he's not going anywhere. Also, blatant disobedience.
Oh no! The Coalition may have found the location of the rubble base!
And, less humorously, he lost a friend. Poor guy.
"Titan put his hoof on the bucks shoulder and nodded."
"buck's".
I like poker but I've never been good at it.
I wonder if the alicorns can read his hand from his mind.
Cherry has a chance for a flush. But that'll probably not resolve.
Or it shall. What a twist.
Cherry wine for the Cherry mare. What could possibly go wrong?
I wonder if Titan is any good at poker. Information looks like a valid betting material.
I wonder just how much booze they have.
Big question from the winner.
With a large answer.
Alcohol usually doesn't taste very good, so of course, Sandstorm wouldn't like it.
Suddenly it is go fish. He he.
And that is a bigger question. This could get messy.
Meh, looks like he didn't muck up. It was a really long answer, though.
"Where's the rum gone?"
Bestest bluff evar. A straight flush is almost the highest you can get, a royal straight flush is better.
I wonder just what has happened to the alicorns other than the whole Goddess bombing.
Err mah gerd. Acknowledgement of other fic being canon. Actually, not unexpected.
The Destroyer. Pfft.
History! Goody!
Iron Giant must be pretty important.
A large automaton, probably. The Iron Giant is the name of a movie that involved Lauren Faust, as you likely already know. Good movie, I watched it dozens of times growing up.
Re: footnote.
It wasn't boring at all, really. I kinda only skimmed the mushy parts between Crimson and Cherry, but they were interesting all the same.
Thank you Ketch, as always it's absolutely wonderful to have your reviews and it means a lot to me. Thank you.
I'm glad that you managed to catch a lot of the references.
True that a royal flush is higher - I just didn't want to give Crimson the absolute highest ranking hand and make it a complete mary sue moment where he's given the very, very most elite stuff to achieve his goal, even if that is a hand of poker.
I'm glad it wasn't boring for you, even if you did skim over the mushy stuff - I expect that to be done by some people as it's not to everyone's tastes, just like Katarn skips over intimacy & fight scenes. (of just about every fic.)
So as long as you enjoyed it, it doesn't really matter. That was just me giving them some mushy mushy happy happy loving tender moments.
Sorry I can't give a full response right now, gotta head off to work, but again, thank you for this, it means a lot.
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Well, I finished up with Chapter 1 and am working through Chapter 2. Sorry it took me so long to finally start reading this Kipper, I think I told you I would way back when you first posted it here...
My reviews probably won't be good in the way of helping with edits and such (I'm not good at that stuff), but will be more of what I thought of the story so far, sorry if you already get enough of that stuff.
Okay, Ch1
Like I said, can't really do edit stuff, but I'll put my random thoughts of the story up after each chapter XD
Good work Kipper, I regret not reading this until now, it's amazing!
My reviews probably won't be good in the way of helping with edits and such (I'm not good at that stuff), but will be more of what I thought of the story so far, sorry if you already get enough of that stuff.
Okay, Ch1
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I love the interaction between Crimson and his mom, it's great!
Heehee Royal Pegasus Voice activate! I want that armor.
It's kinda nice to see ponies who aren't all nervous around overmare and son, much different vibe than what we generally see, and I like it.
Crimson got some serious skill, why can't I flirt like that? And a mare with a .50? I already like her.
Bow chicka bow wow
Tank...your mayor is a dick...a dick who can't listen...
Cherry sure attached to him fast...either she really likes him, or she's had a bit of a crush...I'm leaning toward the latter. Either way, that was a cute moment.
Like I said, can't really do edit stuff, but I'll put my random thoughts of the story up after each chapter XD
Good work Kipper, I regret not reading this until now, it's amazing!
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CamoBadger wrote:Well, I finished up with Chapter 1 and am working through Chapter 2. Sorry it took me so long to finally start reading this Kipper, I think I told you I would way back when you first posted it here...
My reviews probably won't be good in the way of helping with edits and such (I'm not good at that stuff), but will be more of what I thought of the story so far, sorry if you already get enough of that stuff.
Okay, Ch1
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I love the interaction between Crimson and his mom, it's great!
Heehee Royal Pegasus Voice activate! I want that armor.
It's kinda nice to see ponies who aren't all nervous around overmare and son, much different vibe than what we generally see, and I like it.
Crimson got some serious skill, why can't I flirt like that? And a mare with a .50? I already like her.
Bow chicka bow wow
Tank...your mayor is a dick...a dick who can't listen...
Cherry sure attached to him fast...either she really likes him, or she's had a bit of a crush...I'm leaning toward the latter. Either way, that was a cute moment.
Like I said, can't really do edit stuff, but I'll put my random thoughts of the story up after each chapter XD
Good work Kipper, I regret not reading this until now, it's amazing!
You big ol' flatterer. My intro chapter really isn't all that, none of my story is, but I'm glad you liked it.
I've gone and fixed some minor errors yesterday, though I know there's more that I refused to allow myself to go and edit because I was trying to enjoy reading it, rather than picking it apart.
So I will go through it again for grammar, but it's mostly okay.
Haven't read my chapter two yet though.
Ha. sounds so weird, that I write but don't read my own chapters after releasing them.
So yeah, thank you for this! =3
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So, this is a very out of date point to make -- but something came up in the P.Horizons thread that made me think for a moment.
Someone brought up the fact that Cherished Chance uses magic to easily pull out one of Crimsons feathers, when in S2 rainbow gets a feather trapped under a rock and isn't able to release herself from it.
However, also in S2, in H&Hooves day, Sweetie Bell EASILY pulls a feather from Scootaloo to stir the love poison potion with.
Which only further backs my response that perhaps Dashie caught an entire section of her wing under the rock, as much as it only looks like a single feather?
I mean, feathers are like skin, anyway, they grow back and they shed as time goes on so a single feather (or even a few) wouldn't make a difference.
It's only when [you] lose a large portion of them that it makes any difference.
Someone brought up the fact that Cherished Chance uses magic to easily pull out one of Crimsons feathers, when in S2 rainbow gets a feather trapped under a rock and isn't able to release herself from it.
However, also in S2, in H&Hooves day, Sweetie Bell EASILY pulls a feather from Scootaloo to stir the love poison potion with.
Which only further backs my response that perhaps Dashie caught an entire section of her wing under the rock, as much as it only looks like a single feather?
I mean, feathers are like skin, anyway, they grow back and they shed as time goes on so a single feather (or even a few) wouldn't make a difference.
It's only when [you] lose a large portion of them that it makes any difference.
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Oh, also, 4.3k into chapter 15.
This chapter is looking like it'll be anywhere from 12k - 15k long, so it'll be longer then usual.
I plan to have it out on/by Saturday.
This chapter is looking like it'll be anywhere from 12k - 15k long, so it'll be longer then usual.
I plan to have it out on/by Saturday.
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I'm sorry it took so long to get through this, but I'm done with Chapter 2 finally. So, thoughtses time!
- Chapter 2:
Oh Cherry, starting the chapter off with a laugh. I'm liking her more and more as this goes on.
At least she's not afraid of heights...oh shit...maybe I spoke too soon on that. I'm impressed that she didn't get all pissy with him for dropping her once he explained why it happened. Yup, definitely love this girl.
I won't lie, I laughed when Cherry whined through that helmet. It was funny.
K-k-k-KINKY! Damn lucky bastard...
That music fit way too well...lovely scene there Kipper.
Huh, looks like she's still not afraid of flying after what happened. She really trusts him then. And now my theory that she's had a crush on him for longer than she lets on is stronger...
HAHA! Wingsy talks to himself...wait...I shouldn't laugh at that, I do it too...hmm
Heheheh, yes. good. Embarrass the shit out of him Blossom.
Now I love Cherry even more, and am jealous of that ability beyond all belief. Lucky lucky mare.
Turrets...I sense something very important for later in this...
That mental picture of Cherry riding Crimson like Napoleon...best mental image all week XD
He's much better at haggling than BJ...I wonder how he would fair against Charity...
She cries a lot...why do I sense that Crimson is the first pony to ever treat her well...
So much crying...way to go Crimson, that's what? Crying mare #10 since this started?
One last cuddly wuddly with Melony. I certainly hope she enjoys it, because until Crimson gets back, it's all gonna be him and Cherry, and if I'm right, she won't approve of Wingsy hooking up with other mares after what they might go through.
And so our heroes departed to become big goddamn heroes.
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- Chapter 3:
Really Crimson, "return the favor"?
Won't lie...I thought the pony at the bottom of the ravine was going to be part of a trap. Good to see otherwise, and even better to see and AJ's Ranger.
HUZZAH! Timeframe! Good to know that he's getting out into the Wasteland just as everyone in the Wasteland is about to hate pegasi about 100x more than they already did...
"Holla...holla"? Oh god...I hate Molten Rain already...
"Don't run from me puppy, I only want to play with you"...10 POINTS TO CRIMSONDORE!
"I'M THE ONLY ONE WHO BITES HIM" ...20 POINTS TO CHERRYPUFF
Wait...did Cherry just say killing is something you should never wish to do...after clubbing a wolf to death with a rock? ...mares be crazy
A surprise, in a giant pony head? Oh this will be good...
ZAAAAAAR-DOOOOOOOOOOZ
"What do you think of me" Popcorn time?
HAAAA! YOU GET NOTHING!
What's that, someone just said he doesn't think anything will happen on your shift? *pulls on the-shits-gonna-go-down-pants*
"Oh, I'll watch the flank alright"
1) Definitely read this in Shawn Connery's voice
2) 10 POINTS TO FALLENCLAW
What is it with Cherry and squishing skulls? She's starting to scare me a little...
SWEET MOTHER OF LUNA. 50 POINTS TO CRIMSONDORE!
...now...how will Cherry react mewonders?
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CamoBadger wrote:Great chapter. I just hope Crimson stays this way and doesn't fall into some depression and start whining about killing raiders. We've gotten enough of that from BJ.
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Really Crimson, "return the favor"?
Won't lie...I thought the pony at the bottom of the ravine was going to be part of a trap. Good to see otherwise, and even better to see and AJ's Ranger.
HUZZAH! Timeframe! Good to know that he's getting out into the Wasteland just as everyone in the Wasteland is about to hate pegasi about 100x more than they already did...
"Holla...holla"? Oh god...I hate Molten Rain already...
"Don't run from me puppy, I only want to play with you"...10 POINTS TO CRIMSONDORE!
"I'M THE ONLY ONE WHO BITES HIM" ...20 POINTS TO CHERRYPUFF
Wait...did Cherry just say killing is something you should never wish to do...after clubbing a wolf to death with a rock? ...mares be crazy
A surprise, in a giant pony head? Oh this will be good...
ZAAAAAAR-DOOOOOOOOOOZ
"What do you think of me" Popcorn time?
HAAAA! YOU GET NOTHING!
What's that, someone just said he doesn't think anything will happen on your shift? *pulls on the-shits-gonna-go-down-pants*
"Oh, I'll watch the flank alright"
1) Definitely read this in Shawn Connery's voice
2) 10 POINTS TO FALLENCLAW
What is it with Cherry and squishing skulls? She's starting to scare me a little...
SWEET MOTHER OF LUNA. 50 POINTS TO CRIMSONDORE!
...now...how will Cherry react mewonders?
Depression from killing raiders? Oh fuck no!
I won't spoil this for you... but...
Crimson has no regret about what he did. However, he'll have a split second moment of regret over something stupid later on, but it's not the first thing. It's something stupidly laughable.
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Oh, also, thank you for the review!
I'm exceptionally glad you very much liked the execution. He fucking had it coming to him, and I knew Somber would never write it - so I did instead.
I was still really wound up about it, so there was nothing I could do. It had to be done!
Cherry has a thing for skulls.
edit: oh, and another thing, especially like the whole Crimsondore / Cherrypuff / Fallenclaw thing. Hilarious!
I'm exceptionally glad you very much liked the execution. He fucking had it coming to him, and I knew Somber would never write it - so I did instead.
I was still really wound up about it, so there was nothing I could do. It had to be done!
Cherry has a thing for skulls.
edit: oh, and another thing, especially like the whole Crimsondore / Cherrypuff / Fallenclaw thing. Hilarious!
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Glad to hear he won't be depressed over it, I would probably flip a table XD
And since you like it, I shall continue using it Sweetie Belle
And since you like it, I shall continue using it Sweetie Belle
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and this just came through:
God I love Fizzy (Ask Fizzy's mod) so damn much.
Source: http://ask-fizzy.tumblr.com/
God I love Fizzy (Ask Fizzy's mod) so damn much.
Source: http://ask-fizzy.tumblr.com/
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This post right here? This post is to get me getting my ass into gear and get on with the chapter - to try have it released tonight.
/must begin to ignore all distractions and write faster/
/must begin to ignore all distractions and write faster/
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Chapter 15 is released, longest one yet.
with credits it hits 13.5k words
without them it's 13.1k words
...which I know is nothing on Horizons or even Heroes, but to me, it's the longest one yet.
...which brings my total over 161k
with credits it hits 13.5k words
without them it's 13.1k words
...which I know is nothing on Horizons or even Heroes, but to me, it's the longest one yet.
...which brings my total over 161k
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Must...catch up...faster...
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haha, take as long as you need.
I've got the next chapter planned out to some extent, but I'm definitely thinking it'll need more content to be a whole chapter.
Gonna start work on it tomorrow maybe.
I've got the next chapter planned out to some extent, but I'm definitely thinking it'll need more content to be a whole chapter.
Gonna start work on it tomorrow maybe.
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Whee.Kippershy wrote:Chapter 15 is released, longest one yet.
with credits it hits 13.5k words
without them it's 13.1k words
...which I know is nothing on Horizons or even Heroes, but to me, it's the longest one yet.
...which brings my total over 161k
I'll read it after school tomorrow.
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Review.
That's a good thing.
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Looks immediately like a pre-war memory. Perhaps the alicorns are involved.
Looks like a very peaceful atmosphere. I actually have to write a scene with specific mood for homework tonight.
Ponyville.
Of course it involved them alicorns.
That's nice. If only I could remember my dreams.
Of course, he has nightmares of Platinum...
Alicorns are really big. And Eos seems to use that to be supreme at cuddling.
Beacuz ur shuper spschul, Crimson.
Nah, because you help ponies. Because helping is nice.
Kinda interesting story on how she followed him.
Loneliness sucks.
"Trix-"? Hrrrm.
Silly Titan.
"I... wait, hat are you asking me for? Surely you should ask her?"
Maybe 'what', not 'hat?
Eos is being sort of strange. Well, always, I guess.
Dat Charisma.
That's funny. Lt. Colonel Wings, from when the bunker designated him as such.
Dark Dew. Funny name, that one, but I'd bet some context could be given for the name.
A donkey? I wonder if there is an established algorithm for naming donkeys like ponies have.
"These two zebras" reminds me of Camo's fic.
Dat auto-camouflage.
What could possibly go wrong? Also, "a city that never sleeps" seems to apply.
Way to let things slip, Crimson.
Good that he understands that. I don't, but whatever.
Nice little operation going there.
Information is great.
He doesn't seem convinced they are so 'lovely'.
Nice to buy a gift for Cherry.
Good for this one, PLAC.
"Some pegasus" indeed.
Good deal.
"Crimson, and dolor hic tibi proderit olim. to you."
Extra period in there.
This is where the preview was. Dis gon be gud.
"Without a moments pause, I headbutted straight into the opponents groin..."
Apostrophe missing in opponent's.
I don't think Titan will like that message. Or the Coalition.
Quite a conversation.
Hit the hornet's nest with a hammer, would you?
Surefire doesn't like it either.
A winged devil... that steals stock... Mmk...
Maisy.
Crimson's being silly again.
Titan is pretty good at this, though.
Dat contact.
Swords are cool.
"I want you yo reconfirm who you're trying to find."
'to' for 'yo'.
The Merchant is a Spy!
Stupid spy.
Again, dis gon be gud.
Gah, spear.
And now Anarchists.
But then, Maisy.
Badass ninja companion?
Barracks seem dangerous, all the same. No snipers at these ones, I hope.
Re:Footnote.
Maisy seemed really powerful, but zebras with spears are no match, anyhow. Great bruiser, I suggest she be a bit slower in future battles, though.
Also, typo in the thanks for PH, 'Horzions' is what you wrote.
That's a good thing.
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ketchup504 wrote:Review.Enjoyable chapter. Planned on reading half now, and the rest later, but I got sucked in.
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Looks immediately like a pre-war memory. Perhaps the alicorns are involved.
Looks like a very peaceful atmosphere. I actually have to write a scene with specific mood for homework tonight.
Ponyville.
Of course it involved them alicorns.
That's nice. If only I could remember my dreams.
Of course, he has nightmares of Platinum...
Alicorns are really big. And Eos seems to use that to be supreme at cuddling.
Beacuz ur shuper spschul, Crimson.
Nah, because you help ponies. Because helping is nice.
Kinda interesting story on how she followed him.
Loneliness sucks.
"Trix-"? Hrrrm.
Silly Titan.
"I... wait, hat are you asking me for? Surely you should ask her?"
Maybe 'what', not 'hat?
Eos is being sort of strange. Well, always, I guess.
Dat Charisma.
That's funny. Lt. Colonel Wings, from when the bunker designated him as such.
Dark Dew. Funny name, that one, but I'd bet some context could be given for the name.
A donkey? I wonder if there is an established algorithm for naming donkeys like ponies have.
"These two zebras" reminds me of Camo's fic.
Dat auto-camouflage.
What could possibly go wrong? Also, "a city that never sleeps" seems to apply.
Way to let things slip, Crimson.
Good that he understands that. I don't, but whatever.
Nice little operation going there.
Information is great.
He doesn't seem convinced they are so 'lovely'.
Nice to buy a gift for Cherry.
Good for this one, PLAC.
"Some pegasus" indeed.
Good deal.
"Crimson, and dolor hic tibi proderit olim. to you."
Extra period in there.
This is where the preview was. Dis gon be gud.
"Without a moments pause, I headbutted straight into the opponents groin..."
Apostrophe missing in opponent's.
I don't think Titan will like that message. Or the Coalition.
Quite a conversation.
Hit the hornet's nest with a hammer, would you?
Surefire doesn't like it either.
A winged devil... that steals stock... Mmk...
Maisy.
Crimson's being silly again.
Titan is pretty good at this, though.
Dat contact.
Swords are cool.
"I want you yo reconfirm who you're trying to find."
'to' for 'yo'.
The Merchant is a Spy!
Stupid spy.
Again, dis gon be gud.
Gah, spear.
And now Anarchists.
But then, Maisy.
Badass ninja companion?
Barracks seem dangerous, all the same. No snipers at these ones, I hope.
Re:Footnote.
Maisy seemed really powerful, but zebras with spears are no match, anyhow. Great bruiser, I suggest she be a bit slower in future battles, though.
Also, typo in the thanks for PH, 'Horzions' is what you wrote.
That's a good thing.
Awesome, thank you.
Glad I managed to get you sucked in, that's a wonderful thing to hear. Thank you.
Fixed the issues you found (thanks for those) and definitely going to take your suggestion with slowing down Maisy in fights.
Thank you for the review, it's always amazing to read reviews.
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.
Sneak peek at a upcoming piece of art.
I absolutely adore it myself.
I absolutely adore it myself.
- Spoiler:
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.
So...amazing...
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.
Yup, the artwork by the Ask Fizzy mod again <3 I love her so damn much.
http://ofcatsandkings.tumblr.com/ < mod blog
http://ask-fizzy.tumblr.com/ < Ask Fizzy
The picture is a spoiler for you, which is something I should've thought about, but not too much harm done I hope.
Names in respective order in spoiler tag:
http://ofcatsandkings.tumblr.com/ < mod blog
http://ask-fizzy.tumblr.com/ < Ask Fizzy
The picture is a spoiler for you, which is something I should've thought about, but not too much harm done I hope.
Names in respective order in spoiler tag:
- Spoiler:
- Helios, Eos & Selene
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.
Well, it's not a huge spoiler. I mean, knowing they exist doesn't ruin the whole story or anything - though it will explain something once you hit chapter... five? I think.
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.
Came to my attention that the art/ask blog wasn't posted up here.
So, here's the link.
http://foe-brokenbonds.tumblr.com/
contains spoilers, obviously.
So, here's the link.
http://foe-brokenbonds.tumblr.com/
contains spoilers, obviously.
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.
Currently streaming as I write.
Watch here: http://www.livestream.com/kippershygamingstream
Watch here: http://www.livestream.com/kippershygamingstream
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