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Post by FireKat on Thu Nov 08, 2012 12:21 pm

http://gangstaeminem.deviantart.com/#/d5katqd

he too me four months and seven different variations to do (a pice of art should NEVER be rushed)

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Re: I HOPE YALL LIKE IT

Post by IncoherentOrange on Thu Nov 08, 2012 1:36 pm

Not a fan of anthros, seeing as though there's no point to having them in that shape rather than their regular shape, if you want my opinion on the matter.
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Post by Frost on Thu Nov 08, 2012 6:05 pm

Always thought Anthro was a little wierd, myself. Either keep it pony or go all the way to humanized, at least in my opinion
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Post by Ketchup on Fri Nov 09, 2012 12:43 am

I think you need to work on dimension, add some depth to the image.

He's also an anthropomorphic alicorn with a broken horn and heavy scarring... yeah. All too common, I find.
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Re: I HOPE YALL LIKE IT

Post by Plasticube on Fri Nov 09, 2012 11:01 am

Hi, welcome to the forum.

What you have is a start however it needs some work.

If you feel that an alicorn best represents you then stick with it, although as others have pointed out its really really common.

So I would like to make a few suggestions

Please look at the image in the spoiler.......if you don't mind Shy
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Not all scars are external with the gas mask covering your OC's mouth you need to spend more time and put more detail into the eyes, experiment and find an expression that works for you then maybe get rid of a few scars or make some of them faded like they had some time to heal.

Also regarding the scars think about moving some of them to the left, you put more armor on your OC's left so that must be the side he favors. Put more dents and scratches on this side's armor too.

What does the broken horn mean to your OC, right now its useless so if its there just to show that your OC has had a terrible injury then a prosthetic arm or leg would get the message across better.

If he used to be an alicorn in control of a primal force of nature but has been disgraced and thus had his horn broken, update his outfit. You need to show that he used to be somebody great, he would still have some pride left in him and would dress accordingly. Try making his sword and armor really ornate but rusted. Perhaps switch his clothes to a worn, faded and torn business suit and he needs a crown made of whatever he can get his hands on(cans? cardboard?).

Also is he wearing armor or a sleeveless shirt? If it's armor add straps and buckles. If its a shirt show bits of cloth hanging from a hole, then his body and the scars on it.

Your OC's wings are large and your head and arms tend to blend into them, I would suggest using either a slightly darker color for them, making them smaller or putting them at an angle that looks slim from the front.

Your head has problems, while most of it looks like sketch A, the ears and mane suggest that it is B.

the wings might be attached a tad off center.

the length of the arms and legs don't match, they are also pretty long and the legs thinner than usual but that's probably just your style.

Also you need to add a slight bend where his hoofs start, if you look at a horse or pony skeleton you can see that the hoof is a tip toeing foot.

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