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Fallout Equestria: All That Remains

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Post by CamoBadger Wed Nov 28, 2012 5:06 pm

It's all good Kip, I still need to get back into reading your story as well.
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Post by Orm Wed Nov 28, 2012 5:11 pm

Well since I forgot to write something about chapter 5, I'll just do that in this post with my reaction to Ch 6.

Chapter 5:

Chapter 6:
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Post by O. Hinds Wed Nov 28, 2012 8:28 pm

Well, I've just finished the latest chapter. So much mysterious behavior...
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Post by CamoBadger Thu Nov 29, 2012 12:01 pm

Spoiler:

And for serious: Yeah, mysterious behavior every which way, hopefully that didn't detract from it too much...sorry if it did.
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Post by O. Hinds Thu Nov 29, 2012 2:04 pm

CamoBadger wrote:
Spoiler:

And for serious: Yeah, mysterious behavior every which way, hopefully that didn't detract from it too much...sorry if it did.
I think that you managed to stay on the right side of the line. The key thing is that the viewpoint character is just as puzzled and frustrated as the reader; the strange actions are clearly "something deeper is going on here, and the protagonist knows it" rather than "the author has no idea what they're doing".
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Post by Kippershy Sun Dec 02, 2012 11:56 am

Half way through the latest chapter, been damn busy saving everyone's asses on DayZ as of late and only reading for short periods.
Gonna get back to reading.
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Post by CamoBadger Sun Dec 02, 2012 5:42 pm

It's all good man, no rush. I hope you like it.
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Post by Kippershy Sun Dec 02, 2012 5:54 pm

I am. I feel bad for taking so long, I've just got so much constantly requiring my attention and distractions galore, its a pain in the ass because I haven't done shit that I've wanted to.

Thus far I'm just after the bit where Shayle is talking about having turned down the soldier.
Inb4 she gets raped for saying no or something.
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Post by RoboRed Sun Dec 02, 2012 6:59 pm

Dude...you're literally right at the end.
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Post by Ketchup Sun Dec 02, 2012 8:51 pm

As intended, here's an as-read review.
Spoiler:
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Post by CamoBadger Sun Dec 02, 2012 9:18 pm

Thank you so much for the review Ketchup! Twilight Sparkle

And it seems like I'm having some problems making things memorable enough if they are recurring (like Minx and those Raiders), so I'll need to work on it. Thanks for pointing it out (even if you didn't mean to Spike ).
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Post by Ketchup Sun Dec 02, 2012 9:29 pm

Well, it's been about 20 days since I read chapter 5, so it's probably just my memory being the inconsistent enigma it is.
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Post by Kippershy Wed Dec 05, 2012 6:58 pm

After all this time, I've finally gotten through chapter five.
It was a good chapter, sorry for taking so long with it. With all the other things I've been doing and how my focus has been lately, I just haven't been able to do much reading even when I want to / try.

Anyway, good chapter. The fights with the robots were decent and I was surprised when Shayle wasn't forced into anything upon turning the soldier down. Kind've sad to see Shanty burning but I knew it was going to happen.


Can't wait to read the next chapter, hope to start AND finish it tomorrow.
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Post by Orm Thu Dec 06, 2012 9:19 am

Camo, I'm not sure if this is good news or not.
But this got on EQD's FOE side stories update.

Again, not sure if good news or not.
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Post by CamoBadger Thu Dec 06, 2012 12:50 pm

Wait...wut...how...

Oh well. I guess if anything it'll get more reads, so I can't complain about that. Still don't know how it got there without me submitting it to them...
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Post by Orm Thu Dec 06, 2012 12:57 pm

Someone else probably submitted it.
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Post by CamoBadger Thu Dec 06, 2012 12:59 pm

Well, I suppose it's time to use my magic powers and find out who. And I guess I should thank them, it saved me the hassle of having to deal with EQD's team and I'll still get readers from it. Yeah, definitely gotta thank them for that one.
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Post by RoboRed Thu Dec 06, 2012 5:30 pm

We must celebrate this monumental occasion with copious amounts of whiskey and fruit stripe gum.

...or zebra cakes.


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Post by CamoBadger Thu Dec 06, 2012 5:30 pm

((I shall buy coke to mix mine with tonight after class. Then, we drink!))
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Post by RoboRed Thu Dec 06, 2012 5:32 pm

Made a small edit to my previous statement. Also, this is not the RP.
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Post by CamoBadger Thu Dec 06, 2012 5:56 pm

SILENCE! And yes, I'll buy a crapton of zebracakes as well.
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Post by Kippershy Thu Dec 06, 2012 5:58 pm

Through the first half of the chapter, pretty messed up what happens to Charmer but not in the bad way.
Will finish reading tomorrow.
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Post by Kippershy Fri Dec 07, 2012 5:24 pm

AAAAAAND I'm up to date. Good chapter, messed up in a way but not in a bad way. I do wonder if the sex between Seer and Xion was completely consensual though.

As for a full review, I'll do that tomorrow. Going sleep now.
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Post by CamoBadger Fri Dec 07, 2012 5:27 pm

Thanks for reading Kipper, can't wait to see the full review Twilight Sparkle
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Post by CamoBadger Sat Dec 08, 2012 9:23 pm

Well, the new chapter is up, quicker than the last gap thankfully. I hope everyone enjoys it! Twilight Sparkle
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Post by Orm Sat Dec 08, 2012 9:41 pm

Will read it once I get home.
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Post by O. Hinds Sat Dec 08, 2012 11:35 pm

CamoBadger wrote:Well, the new chapter is up, quicker than the last gap thankfully. I hope everyone enjoys it! Twilight Sparkle
The FIMFiction version doesn't seem to have updated yet.
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Post by CamoBadger Sat Dec 08, 2012 11:36 pm

Oh yeah, knew I forgot something Scootaloo
It's been a long week
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Post by O. Hinds Sat Dec 08, 2012 11:42 pm

CamoBadger wrote:Oh yeah, knew I forgot something Scootaloo
It's been a long week
No worries; I've got some stuff left to do before I'm ready to start reading it anyway.
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Post by O. Hinds Sun Dec 09, 2012 1:21 am

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Another good chapter, I think.
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