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Re: Fallout Equestria: All That Remains

Post by CamoBadger on Wed Nov 28, 2012 5:06 pm

It's all good Kip, I still need to get back into reading your story as well.

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Post by Orm on Wed Nov 28, 2012 5:11 pm

Well since I forgot to write something about chapter 5, I'll just do that in this post with my reaction to Ch 6.

Chapter 5:

I fucking hate you!
I knew something like that would happen!

Chapter 6:

Okay, I don't you as much as I thought I would.
I feel really bad for Charmer, but I'm glad she's not dead.
Though that really sucks for Little Doc, and I'm sure Felix isn't going to be happy about that.


Also, I think I found the reference to the RP.
That was funny.
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Post by O. Hinds on Wed Nov 28, 2012 8:28 pm

Well, I've just finished the latest chapter. So much mysterious behavior...
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Post by CamoBadger on Thu Nov 29, 2012 12:01 pm

Spoiler:

And for serious: Yeah, mysterious behavior every which way, hopefully that didn't detract from it too much...sorry if it did.

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Post by O. Hinds on Thu Nov 29, 2012 2:04 pm

CamoBadger wrote:
Spoiler:

And for serious: Yeah, mysterious behavior every which way, hopefully that didn't detract from it too much...sorry if it did.
I think that you managed to stay on the right side of the line. The key thing is that the viewpoint character is just as puzzled and frustrated as the reader; the strange actions are clearly "something deeper is going on here, and the protagonist knows it" rather than "the author has no idea what they're doing".
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Post by Kippershy on Sun Dec 02, 2012 11:56 am

Half way through the latest chapter, been damn busy saving everyone's asses on DayZ as of late and only reading for short periods.
Gonna get back to reading.
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Post by CamoBadger on Sun Dec 02, 2012 5:42 pm

It's all good man, no rush. I hope you like it.

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Post by Kippershy on Sun Dec 02, 2012 5:54 pm

I am. I feel bad for taking so long, I've just got so much constantly requiring my attention and distractions galore, its a pain in the ass because I haven't done shit that I've wanted to.

Thus far I'm just after the bit where Shayle is talking about having turned down the soldier.
Inb4 she gets raped for saying no or something.
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Post by RoboRed on Sun Dec 02, 2012 6:59 pm

Dude...you're literally right at the end.

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Re: Fallout Equestria: All That Remains

Post by Ketchup on Sun Dec 02, 2012 8:51 pm

As intended, here's an as-read review.
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I remember that Shanty was destroyed, with the news coming via radio.
Page 1
The little grey ball could be a few things. My guess is a talisman of some sort, perhaps something along the lines of a targeting system or EFS.
Page 2
Plenty of ways this could go. The survivors could be hostile, there could be none, they may be friendly, or they may be friendly and Seer attacks them.
Page 3
Not awesomely equipped yet. SOON...
Oohhh. A Stable.
Huh. I don't remember the raiders.
Page 4
They must be some sort of badasses.
She probably started it.
They could try to convince the Zebras that they weren't making weapons?
Page 5
How pleasant, those guys.
Cruel reality of things.
Maybe it's their rifle-wielding friend from earlier, whats-his-face.
Page 6
Or is it? We shall see.
Little Doc. Bad situation.
Page 7
Ouch.
All evil? There's a trope for that.
Page 8
Who's this? I've forgotten, as she doesn't seem to be Seer.
Well Shayle, you were asking questions in number earlier.
Page 9
Dem crazy all-knowing zebras.
Page 10
I thought it was the cave, and it was. Yay.
Gah, this fellow.
Page 11
Or another creepy zebra.
In a mound of... Something?
Page 12
How sad, she really liked the snakes.
She's probably only alive because of cauterization, though the nerve shock would be tremendous.
Page 13
How gruesome.
I wonder if Doc will help.
Rhyming Buck is of questionable motives.
Page 14
I don't know how he'll react to her defiance.
They don't seem to care about the ponies at all aside from them staying there.
Page 15
Reminds me a lot of DayZ. People can seem friendly and shoot you in the back.
An excuse to destroy business competitors?
D'aww.
Page 16
Good question. Where is Seer?
Seems suspicious.
Page 17
A mine, perhaps?
What an odd creature.
wood doesn't bleed.
Page 18
Certainly didn't see that coming.
What an unusual euphemism.
Page 19
Following orders, huh?
Page 20
I'm guessing the violent settlement is New Oatleans.
Page 21
*Waits for Lancer style betrayal*
Page 22
That is no good. I don't like this Xion character. He's a liar, too.
I wonder what he means about Seer.
Page 23
Everything turned out better than expected.
Or not. What a bastard.
Page 24
No, you told the truth. You didn't mess up.
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Re: Fallout Equestria: All That Remains

Post by CamoBadger on Sun Dec 02, 2012 9:18 pm

Thank you so much for the review Ketchup! Twilight Sparkle

And it seems like I'm having some problems making things memorable enough if they are recurring (like Minx and those Raiders), so I'll need to work on it. Thanks for pointing it out (even if you didn't mean to Spike ).

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Re: Fallout Equestria: All That Remains

Post by Ketchup on Sun Dec 02, 2012 9:29 pm

Well, it's been about 20 days since I read chapter 5, so it's probably just my memory being the inconsistent enigma it is.
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Re: Fallout Equestria: All That Remains

Post by Kippershy on Wed Dec 05, 2012 6:58 pm

After all this time, I've finally gotten through chapter five.
It was a good chapter, sorry for taking so long with it. With all the other things I've been doing and how my focus has been lately, I just haven't been able to do much reading even when I want to / try.

Anyway, good chapter. The fights with the robots were decent and I was surprised when Shayle wasn't forced into anything upon turning the soldier down. Kind've sad to see Shanty burning but I knew it was going to happen.


Can't wait to read the next chapter, hope to start AND finish it tomorrow.
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Re: Fallout Equestria: All That Remains

Post by Orm on Thu Dec 06, 2012 9:19 am

Camo, I'm not sure if this is good news or not.
But this got on EQD's FOE side stories update.

Again, not sure if good news or not.
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Post by CamoBadger on Thu Dec 06, 2012 12:50 pm

Wait...wut...how...

Oh well. I guess if anything it'll get more reads, so I can't complain about that. Still don't know how it got there without me submitting it to them...

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Post by Orm on Thu Dec 06, 2012 12:57 pm

Someone else probably submitted it.
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Post by CamoBadger on Thu Dec 06, 2012 12:59 pm

Well, I suppose it's time to use my magic powers and find out who. And I guess I should thank them, it saved me the hassle of having to deal with EQD's team and I'll still get readers from it. Yeah, definitely gotta thank them for that one.

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Post by RoboRed on Thu Dec 06, 2012 5:30 pm

We must celebrate this monumental occasion with copious amounts of whiskey and fruit stripe gum.

...or zebra cakes.


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Mister Frost's friend, "Darren" wrote:"I'm scared to break up with her, though. Her dad's an ex-marine; if I make her cry he'll club me over the head with a pillowcase full of doorknobs and Tom Clancy novels."

Sindri wrote:This is a thread for fans of a fanfiction of a fanfiction about murderous miniature pastel equines in a grimdark post-apocalyptic future.
If you wanted to stay anywhere near socially acceptable, you should have taken a left turn about three layers of WTF back.

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Post by CamoBadger on Thu Dec 06, 2012 5:30 pm

((I shall buy coke to mix mine with tonight after class. Then, we drink!))

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Post by RoboRed on Thu Dec 06, 2012 5:32 pm

Made a small edit to my previous statement. Also, this is not the RP.

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CamoBadger wrote:((Wow, zebra incest is powerful shit))

Mister Frost's friend, "Darren" wrote:"I'm scared to break up with her, though. Her dad's an ex-marine; if I make her cry he'll club me over the head with a pillowcase full of doorknobs and Tom Clancy novels."

Sindri wrote:This is a thread for fans of a fanfiction of a fanfiction about murderous miniature pastel equines in a grimdark post-apocalyptic future.
If you wanted to stay anywhere near socially acceptable, you should have taken a left turn about three layers of WTF back.

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Post by CamoBadger on Thu Dec 06, 2012 5:56 pm

SILENCE! And yes, I'll buy a crapton of zebracakes as well.

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Post by Kippershy on Thu Dec 06, 2012 5:58 pm

Through the first half of the chapter, pretty messed up what happens to Charmer but not in the bad way.
Will finish reading tomorrow.
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Post by Kippershy on Fri Dec 07, 2012 5:24 pm

AAAAAAND I'm up to date. Good chapter, messed up in a way but not in a bad way. I do wonder if the sex between Seer and Xion was completely consensual though.

As for a full review, I'll do that tomorrow. Going sleep now.
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Post by CamoBadger on Fri Dec 07, 2012 5:27 pm

Thanks for reading Kipper, can't wait to see the full review Twilight Sparkle

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Post by CamoBadger on Sat Dec 08, 2012 9:23 pm

Well, the new chapter is up, quicker than the last gap thankfully. I hope everyone enjoys it! Twilight Sparkle

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Post by Orm on Sat Dec 08, 2012 9:41 pm

Will read it once I get home.
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Post by O. Hinds on Sat Dec 08, 2012 11:35 pm

CamoBadger wrote:Well, the new chapter is up, quicker than the last gap thankfully. I hope everyone enjoys it! Twilight Sparkle
The FIMFiction version doesn't seem to have updated yet.
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Post by CamoBadger on Sat Dec 08, 2012 11:36 pm

Oh yeah, knew I forgot something Scootaloo
It's been a long week

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Post by O. Hinds on Sat Dec 08, 2012 11:42 pm

CamoBadger wrote:Oh yeah, knew I forgot something Scootaloo
It's been a long week
No worries; I've got some stuff left to do before I'm ready to start reading it anyway.
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Post by O. Hinds on Sun Dec 09, 2012 1:21 am

Spoiler:

Ah, so it was a loyalty check, not an indoctrination measure, as a friend and when when discussing it thought (he's still working his way through the original FoE, but this sort of things came up in conversation). That makes sense.

Positional data…
Any opinion on this? I'm not sure yet about putting it in, but I thought that I'd see what, if anything, you had to say.
Spoiler:

ROTORCRAFT!
Urgh, there are so few details given… I doubt that it's a rotodaen, as I don't see how Spur would keep one running even if it had one in the first place. Griffinchasers aren't usually described as being that noise, but then they're not described often at all… though I don't think that they've the lifting capacity for heavy weapons or armor (the latter being needed to explain why Shayle didn't notice the pony pedaling). It could be some manner of robot, but we've not seen a model like this before…
My present hypothesis is that it's a griffinchaser modified to use a spark motor instead of pedals, armed, and fitted with a closed and armored cockpit. It's good at providing air support for a military force that wouldn't usually have access to it, but it has a very short range and likely relatively poor maneuverability for a rotorcraft. Am I right?
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, but more Wasteland-cobbled-togethery?
Another good chapter, I think.
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