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Fallout Equestria: All That Remains

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Post by O. Hinds Sat Apr 27, 2013 5:54 pm

Kippershy wrote:
O. Hinds wrote:@Kippershy:
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Post by CamoBadger Sun Apr 28, 2013 12:11 am

Thanks Kipper, I'm glad you liked the chapter ^-^
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Post by Kippershy Sun Apr 28, 2013 1:09 am

To me the difference is semantics, O.Hinds, but yeah.

And I'm glad you keep pumping out such high quality content, Camo.
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Post by O. Hinds Sun Apr 28, 2013 1:24 am

Kippershy wrote:To me the difference is semantics, O.Hinds, but yeah.
...I'm sorry, but I'm not sure what you mean.
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Post by Kippershy Sun Apr 28, 2013 5:59 am

Google defines semantics (2) as the meaning of a word, phrase or sentence.
basically i'm saying that though technically you are correct in calling it a gunship instead of an airship, to laymans terms its the same principal with some slight differences.


Both fly through the sky, one is intended for war / combat where-as the other isn't. To me, the difference is next to nothing because of this.
as such the difference to me is just semantics.
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Post by O. Hinds Sun Apr 28, 2013 11:56 am

Kippershy wrote:Google defines semantics (2) as the meaning of a word, phrase or sentence.
basically i'm saying that though technically you are correct in calling it a gunship instead of an airship, to laymans terms its the same principal with some slight differences.


Both fly through the sky, one is intended for war / combat where-as the other isn't. To me, the difference is next to nothing because of this.
as such the difference to me is just semantics.
Ah, I see; you were replying only to that part.

But "gunship" and "airship" have quite different meanings.
"gunship |ˈgənˌ sh ip|
noun
an airplane or a helicopter heavily armed with machine guns or with machine guns and cannon, providing air support for ground troops in combat."
"airship |ˈe(ə)rˌ sh ip|
noun
a power-driven aircraft that is kept buoyant by a body of gas (typically helium, formerly hydrogen) that is lighter than air."
Now, both of those definitions are a bit narrow, certainly when dealing with FoE, but I still don't think the words have overlapping meanings.
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Post by Kippershy Sun Apr 28, 2013 4:57 pm

I think when talking FOE, as long as the general message is put across something like that isn't really half as important if its in idle banter.
If I was -writing- the story myself and misused the terms, it'd be different, of course.
However, in casual chat about what could and in my mind, should happen, such strictness on technicalities shouldn't matter if the meaning is still put across.
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Post by CamoBadger Sun Apr 28, 2013 6:51 pm

swicked wrote:I read chapter 8. It was fun!
I'll post a review later; I just wanted to thank you now Twilight Sparkle
Thanks swicked!
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Post by CamoBadger Mon Apr 29, 2013 12:19 am

I laughed a lot during that, thank you. And the rapping/singing/rhyming was great.

Also, the thing with Shayle asking about tagging almost killed me, thank you for that as well Twilight Sparkle

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I'm glad you liked it swicked, and thank you again! I like the new Trixie reviews


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Post by Ketchup Mon Apr 29, 2013 12:21 am

swicked wrote:snip
Heh, that's great. Had to control my laughter to keep from disrupting my brother.
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Post by Guest Tue Apr 30, 2013 2:07 am

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Post by CamoBadger Tue Apr 30, 2013 12:46 pm

Thanks Last. And sorry you didn't enjoy the lack of Shayle recently. But now that they're back together she'll be getting more attention and more excitement (because she loves excitement).
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Post by Kippershy Tue Apr 30, 2013 2:34 pm

CamoBadger wrote:Thanks Last. And sorry you didn't enjoy the lack of Shayle recently. But now that they're back together she'll be getting more attention and more excitement (because she loves excitement).
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I thought we all knew this anyway?
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Post by Kippershy Tue Apr 30, 2013 5:48 pm

Last wrote:
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The other trouble is this:
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Post by Guest Wed May 01, 2013 6:34 pm

Here Camo:

Sorry it's not very good. I hope you like it anyway.

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Post by CamoBadger Wed May 01, 2013 6:56 pm

That looks great! Thanks Last!
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Post by CamoBadger Tue May 07, 2013 3:03 pm

So, for the Fallout: Equestria group on FiMFiction we had a writing contest for hitting 500 members. Originally I wasn't going to participate, but someone there got an idea so stuck in my head that I had to get it out, so I ended up entering a story about pre-apocalypse New Oatleans.

If anyone wants to take a look, here's a link to the story:
Under Falling Skies


Also, for an update on ATR:
Ch.15 is fully outlined and sitting at about 3500 words as of right now. Hopefully will have it out before the 20th.
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Post by Frost Tue May 07, 2013 3:09 pm

I know I said this already over PM, but I really liked this story

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Post by O. Hinds Wed May 08, 2013 2:04 am

Well, I've just finished "Under Falling Skies" and found it good.
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Oh, and I set the end of the story to Lungo La Strada, which seemed to fit somewhat well.
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Post by CamoBadger Wed May 08, 2013 2:23 am

There may or may not be a shoutout at some point Santa
And thanks Hinds, I'm glad you enjoyed it Twilight Sparkle
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Post by Plasticube Wed May 08, 2013 4:30 pm

The scholar and the soldier.
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started as a wall mural, ended up as a bejeweled data storage device

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Post by CamoBadger Wed May 08, 2013 4:33 pm

Holy...Crap...

That's awesome man, I love it! The jewels in the Sun, Moon and Stars are a fantastic touch, it's so awesome!
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Post by Ketchup Wed May 08, 2013 5:10 pm

Plasticube wrote:The scholar and the soldier.
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started as a wall mural, ended up as a bejeweled data storage device
Hm, very nice, Plast.
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Post by CamoBadger Thu May 09, 2013 9:37 pm

Thanks Trixie swicked! I'm glad you liked it aside from Shayle complaining constantly Applebloom
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Post by Ketchup Fri May 10, 2013 1:07 am

So, after testing whether using my old netbook for reading before going to sleep would actually get me reading with the prologue and first chapter, it turns out it does.

Looking back, I didn't know what to think of your story until chapter three. Going through it now with differing respect for the type of darkness and themes shown in it, I greatly enjoy the prologue and first chapter. I guess I change more than I thought.

And I still want to give Shayle a hug, she's probably the most sympathy-inducing character I've ever read.

Now to keep this story from seeping into my thoughts again and disrupting my afternoon classes... or not...
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Post by Ketchup Fri May 10, 2013 3:14 pm

swicked wrote:
Ketchup wrote:And I still want to give Shayle a hug, she's probably the most sympathy-inducing character I've ever read.
...maybe I don't understand sympathy, but I typically wanna smack the girl from time to time throughout each chapter. I can't say I've ever gotten the urge to hug her, but *shrug*
Sympathy may not have been the most proper word for it, but she's just the right kind of sad to actually get at me.
The hug thing is related somewhat to that.
Weird as that is.
I like her well-enough, though; this is an entertaining story.
No argument from me.
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Post by Guest Fri May 10, 2013 6:21 pm

swicked wrote:Ah. I have a very small target for sadness that isn't often hit.
This fic hasn't had any luck with it so far.

Vault-Tec Assisted Targeting System wrote: You have no chance to hit that target.

I wish I could have found a screen shot of that pipboy message

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Post by Ketchup Fri May 10, 2013 6:54 pm

swicked wrote:Ah. I have a very small target for sadness that isn't often hit.
This fic hasn't had any luck with it so far.
Mine's rather small too, but yours is in a different place and undoubtedly smaller. Metaphorically speaking.
I love the diversity of this fandom.
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Vault-Tec Assisted Targeting System wrote: You have no chance to hit that target.
Pfft.
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