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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Derpmind on Sun Sep 09, 2012 12:30 pm

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Post by Kippershy on Sun Sep 09, 2012 12:40 pm

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Liking the start of the chapter, Glory showing both sides of herself with throwing her [Blackjack] against the wall and then asking if she's okay, only to carry on being angry as soon as the answer is 'well enough'.
Glory in her righteous anger, showing her true insecurity. Very well written thus far, very, very human in that.

...And then Blackjack decides to be a fucking moron and say "Oh, maybe I DID do it a little for the enjoyment..."
Jesus christ Blackjack, I think even -I- have a little more tact then that. (HEY, I SAID A LITTLE, OKAY?)

P-21 IS HERE TO SAVE THE DAY!?!

P-21 and Scotch, I never expected them two to be doing this, but... what a point. There's definitely a good point behind their points, and it's funny to see Blackjack admit to having around 50 ponies or so.
...Actually, she sounds exactly like one of my exes. (She had 61 guys before me, which was a fuckin' shock to find out.)

Because she needed to, indeed. If she hadn't slept with him, how would she be able to handle the wasteland again? She'd already proven that she couldn't, she needed the chance to show herself that she could trust males, if not fully then at least a little. Not everyone is the person (or people) who attacked you.
Interesting to see Scotch already notched up three though.


So, just got to the 'break' where Blackjack says if she's not worthy of Glory's love... yadda yadda yadda. I like it. I like how you handled the first meeting, how P-21 had been trying to calm Glory down and make her feel better, trying to explain everything. I like how Glory ignored it all because of her own upbringing being such a stark contrast, unable to understand why until a face to face resolution.


Onwards!



Very touching with Glory sobbing on the bed. All this is a complete shock to her and she still can't understand, perhaps doesn't want to believe, but knows it's true. Damn it's hard on someone when this happens.
I've not been in Blackjacks position on this, ever. I have however, been in Glory's, and I know how much it really strikes the heart to have such a tormenting and painful experience rip you apart like she has.

D'aawwww, my god. I'd almost forgotten about how soul objects can see/hear/sense (or something) and how they can choose to do things as they wish. I mean, yes the statuettes are a prime example of that, but I still haven't really come to think of them in that sense, as much as I should've.
Octavia helping out Blackjack at a time like this would be absolutely amazing and an utter honour.


Thank you, Ocatvia.
Damn, Blackjack fessing up to possibly/probably badly hurting Glory's sis.

And now it's the filly part and Glory's crying and again, exceedingly well written, as always. I wish I had more to say, you deserve a lot more to be said, but I'm just so engrossed that I find it hard to think of anything other then what's next, what's next... gotta read on and on without pause.
Makes it hard to do reviews.

Bitching about others always makes one feel good, eh? Ha. Glad that things moved to a more solid ground of topic.

Both of the two going through body issues, interesting to see Glory is getting biological level urges to exercise to high degrees (as you would with such a body, I reckon -- wouldn't know personally since I've always been slightly overweight but from what I can tell from the super fit people, it's a drug to them.)

>Not letting Glory know you died again
>1250AD (After Discord) (Est.)
>ISHYGDDT

hahhahaha. Glory going red at the spanking idea. Sounds good.

And at the next break. Good to see that Blackjack is FINALLY going to be sensible and take a break, stop focusing on herself and instead, on her friends and make sure they're better before even considering going out again.
Also, yes, I agree that if the Harbingers show up, she SHOULD show them the full force of Security, without hesitation nor mercy.
The only mercy worth giving is the mercy of quick justice.


Hmmm, detective Boo huh? Finding all the clues to Blackjacks mystery. Just got to the point where Boo falls over in the box and reveals a new orb. Really cute imagery, can't wait for Ryx to draw that.

Again, got too engrossed with the story. Whhhhhhhhheres pinkie pie? HERE I AM!
Anyway, again, as always, very damn well written. I wish I could think of something else to say, but I can't right now, sorry. You deserve a lot better, thankfully, someone else will fill that gap for me.

Discussion with Watcher is interesting.




I'm sorry Somber, there's nothing I can say. I'm just too far stuck into the chapter and can't think of anything, despite how much I'm enjoying it all. I'll post this and maybe post again tomorrow or something like that, with the other half of your chater post-reading review.
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Kattlarv on Sun Sep 09, 2012 12:45 pm

@O.Hinds: (R34) No, no, not that. Our comment thread usually split at page 34 you know? This time it went over that by a few pages :P
And ah, seems like SOMEONE else than me remembered Yay! And you call me perverse *gigglesnorts* I win this round xD

@Cao: No, no, I am sure you mean "Get yer mind IN it"

@Vali: Seems kinda interesting, and technically leans in to approve one of my "things" hehe. But won't have time to read it, seems interesting though as said, and also seems to appeal to the whole "anatomy" thing.

@Iron: Well, I do try to both make sense, as much as I can, and not be dull hehe.

@Inco: (Stables) As said, has kinda been already been done, unless you mean "lesser known" or "unknown" stables, like the one I made, stable 69 (not to be confused with 89, the "fake" 69 xP Nor the actually side fic one that somewhat recently popped up. But as said, made my stable like, a year ago or so. But yeah, would technically have to change number if I ever want to throw it in.) I originally wanted 42, but that was already taken when I made it. As said, mentioned it before, but base premise was that it only had mares in it. To see how/if they would build their society/rules differently if they only were mares from the start with no male influence at all. And it was planned to "jump" between the main 3 characters each chapter.

@EP: And hey! Looks like the worst time possible to make a new comment, but what the heck, cba to wait 1-2 days to post heh. Will not be able to read it today, but will make a chunk of it hopefully. And uegh... sometimes I really hate my mom. If she at least could stop comparing me to my sister. "She has a boyfriend", "she's studying medicine", "she's won gold medals in both the world, and the European championships". And some people wonder why I have an inferiority complex... anyhow, looking forward to reading this, and I hope to Gummy it will not be a huge let down or disappointing like large parts of some of the other recent ones. But eh, who knows, Somber writes what makes sense to her.
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Kippershy on Sun Sep 09, 2012 1:28 pm

here's something I think needs fixing:

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"“What
it means is, I suspect your idea might work. By transferring the
memories the souls have on death to Rampage, we might be able to piece
together an understanding of how Rampage came to be,” Lacunae said in my
mind.
"

I might be wrong, but I think you mean to say that if you transfer the memories to the orbs... 'cos they're already IN rampage.
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Cptadder on Sun Sep 09, 2012 1:31 pm

Okay reaction time, spent a few hours knowing there was a chapter today but being unable to read it because of life.

Right then reactions

What I liked
The fight was a lot shorter than I thought it would be but it flowed well.


Blackjack wrote:That… she was upset about that?” I muttered, trying to wrap my head around it. It was crazy to be upset about sex. That was like… like being upset because somepony stole your carrot chips in the cafeteria.
That's such a perfect 99'ers analogy

Glory wrote:Well… good for her…” she muttered.
I love how that comes out after Glory is hearing about what happen to Whisper, in context it's adokrable like "oh yeah the batpony who shagged my girl hooked up with the crazy pony... good for her.. I guess?"

Oh hey it's Boo, and she has plot details! Thanks for stopping by Boo

Pinkie Pie does have slasher villain powers doesn't she? No matter how fast you run and how slow she bounces she always beats you there

Another Watcher conversation! I always like these carefully done links back to FoE... Champion in bed

Best conversation wrote:“The only theory I’ll accept,” I thought bluntly at her. “If we don’t find any proof, then we keep digging till we do. Like with science. And if we still don’t, then we lie till we do.”
“That’s not how science works, Blackjack,” Lacunae told me with an air of infinite patience.
But that my dear is how MAD Science works! Nothing trumps Science but MAD Science!

What I noticed
First off the Glory+Blackjack confrontation played out as "" envisioned it to begin with so point goes to "". But the fact the 99'ers stepped in and Glory started pummeling her good, hmm partial credit?

P-21 has a hat, when did he get a hat? Is it a Applejack hat, and if not why do I imagine him with a pony shaped John Deere trucker hat?

Scotch Tape having set backs is good, to many people think design work is easy


Boo wrote:Boo flopped into a half-empty box. I looked around the dim space. “I dunno if you can hear me, but… I’d like to talk, if we could.” The pale blank sat up with a crinkly astronomy magazine atop her head like a hat
Dawww

The Goddess is talking in her normal bombastic voice when threatening Blackjack is odd

Interesting Charity dislikes Scotch for having a parent, that's one of those obvious in retrospect things.

Ahah so Glory IS into the dominatrix thing, and her safe word is apparently Rainbow Dash... that's all kind of messed up

And hello Glory's mom.

What I disliked[/b]
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Glory flipped zero tables and threw Blackjack through zero windows
The flow of the building collapse and drowned filly was all over the place, I had to re-read it three times to get what was going on and the whole village staring at her felt forced considering the collapsed masonry and trapped pony

No boats were dropped on Blackjack this week.
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Cptadder on Sun Sep 09, 2012 1:39 pm

Hey.... question did Blackjack ever tell Watcher that she let Discord run free? More and more I wonder about that. About who knows he's free and what he's up to.
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Ironmonger on Sun Sep 09, 2012 1:39 pm

@Kattlarv I can relate to that a little. I have a brother 8 years my senior with an IQ of 240 last time I checked, and while I'm above average myself I feel completely stupid or straight-up mentally disabled when I'm around him.

Also I figured out (I think) why its a bad idea to compare to Somber. He did most of the story while unemployed so he had a ton of time. I think he also has a passion for writing which makes him lightning fast at writing. Unlike me who writes as a hobby an has a busy-ass day and little free time. It's like comparing a Sherman tank to an IS-2. Derpy Hooves

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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Cptadder on Sun Sep 09, 2012 1:44 pm

Ironmonger wrote:@Kattlarv I can relate to that a little. I have a brother 8 years my senior with an IQ of 240 last time I checked, and while I'm above average myself I feel completely stupid or straight-up mentally disabled when I'm around him.
Wait 240? On what scale? The standard Stanford–Binet Intelligence Scales go from 0 to 160 with scores higher than 170 being impossible to get even if you factor in age bonuses (Someone who's 14 taking the same test as a 30 year old both getting identical number of correct answers the 30 year old might get a 140 while the 14 gets a 160 because of age factors)

So 240 on what scale?

*Edit
Another factor with the Stanford Binet is it's periodic revision as it seeks to graph average intelligence meaning a 1920 test is easier than a 2012 test as average human intelligence has been increasing by a two point factor every generation which means the average score of humanity is twelve points higher than when the tests were first administered thus the scoring system has been adjusted for that fact.
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Katarn on Sun Sep 09, 2012 1:48 pm

@Cptadder @P-21's hat. It's hat from (sorry forgot the name) a pony from mine, who was left barely alive by Sanguine, after BJ was 'augmented'
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Ironmonger on Sun Sep 09, 2012 1:50 pm

I'm unsure of what scale or test. The only data I can offer is that my mother told me this and she was serious, she doesn't know what test or scale. That's why I said 'last time I checked' because saying something so debatable as final would be dumb.

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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Tytan on Sun Sep 09, 2012 1:51 pm

I must know Davids secret! How is it that he so consistently pushes my buttons, more specifically the buttons that make my insides feel all squirmy.

With the latest chapter he started pushing buttons I didn't know I had!
Spoiler:
When the Goddess started fucking with Blackjacks brain...
I thought I was going to vomit my own intestines out. I didn't know I found that repulsive.

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(I don't drink so the only solace I have is knowing how the great mutated cunt dies. Also thinking about Blackjack jumping into an enervation field to mess with her or thinking about the song that never ends cuz it goes on and on my friends.)

Davids must be a psychology teacher, because there is no way a normal person can screw with my head this much. And I must be a masochist because I'm rereading Horizons before it's even done.


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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Kippershy on Sun Sep 09, 2012 1:56 pm

Finally done. AMAZING chapter.
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Katarn on Sun Sep 09, 2012 1:56 pm

@Tytan IIRC, Somber are English language teacher (and I may be shunned for not telling you, that Somber is pony, who writes the story, and English teacher are David...)
Btw..I'd suggest for you and others to put discussion of new chapter(s) under spoiler tag until at least 1 day after publishing chapter are gone. So people wont, unintentionally, read spoilers to new chapter.
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Tytan on Sun Sep 09, 2012 2:06 pm

Katarn wrote:@Tytan IIRC, Somber are English language teacher (and I may be shunned for not telling you, that Somber is pony, who writes the story, and English teacher are David...)
Btw..I'd suggest for you and others to put discussion of new chapter(s) under spoiler tag until at least 1 day after publishing chapter are gone. So people wont, unintentionally, read spoilers to new chapter.

I'm sorry. I R NOObY. Seriously that was my first post here. I don't know the rules. I kinda made that post for some sense of catharsis to relieve some of the squirmieness in my squishy bits.

But fear not! I'm a quick study and I will learn the rules. I'll edit that first post in a bit.

^Done


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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Somber on Sun Sep 09, 2012 2:25 pm

Thank you. And thank you every pony for your feedback. It really means a ton to me. Even more than donations in the tip jar... knowing this story matters to you makes it matter to me.

And sorry for messing with your head. Goddess is not nice. She took out all her nice. Now nasty is all that's left...
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Kippershy on Sun Sep 09, 2012 2:27 pm

Tytan wrote:
Katarn wrote:@Tytan IIRC, Somber are English language teacher (and I may be shunned for not telling you, that Somber is pony, who writes the story, and English teacher are David...)
Btw..I'd suggest for you and others to put discussion of new chapter(s) under spoiler tag until at least 1 day after publishing chapter are gone. So people wont, unintentionally, read spoilers to new chapter.

I'm sorry. I R NOObY. Seriously that was my first post here. I don't know the rules. I kinda made that post for some sense of catharsis to relieve some of the squirmieness in my squishy bits.

But fear not! I'm a quick study and I will learn the rules. I'll edit that first post in a bit.

^Done

>Using the screen name Tytan
>Avoiding paying royalties to my character, Titan, from my story.

What the fuck did you just fucking say about me, you little bitch?
I’ll have you know I graduated top of my class in the Navy Seals, and
I’ve been involved in numerous secret raids on Al-Quaeda, and I have
over 300 confirmed kills. I am trained in gorilla warfare and I’m the
top sniper in the entire US armed forces. You are nothing to me but just
another target. I will wipe you the fuck out with precision the likes
of which has never been seen before on this Earth, mark my fucking
words. You think you can get away with saying that shit to me over the
Internet? Think again, fucker. As we speak I am contacting my secret
network of spies across the USA and your IP is
being traced right now so you better prepare for the storm, maggot. The
storm that wipes out the pathetic little thing you call your life.
You’re fucking dead, kid. I can be anywhere, anytime, and I can kill you
in over seven hundred ways, and that’s just with my bare hands. Not
only am I extensively trained in unarmed combat, but I have access to
the entire arsenal of the United States Marine Corps and I will use it
to its full extent to wipe your miserable ass off the face of the
continent, you little shit. If only you could have known what unholy
retribution your little “clever” comment was about to bring down upon
you, maybe you would have held your fucking tongue. But you couldn’t,
you didn’t, and now you’re paying the price, you goddamn idiot. I will
shit fury all over you and you will drown in it. You’re fucking dead,
kiddo.
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Kippershy on Sun Sep 09, 2012 2:30 pm

Katarn wrote:@Cptadder @P-21's hat. It's hat from (sorry forgot the name) a pony from mine, who was left barely alive by Sanguine, after BJ was 'augmented'

Dusty Trails.
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by CamoBadger on Sun Sep 09, 2012 2:31 pm

lol Kipper, don't scare him off yet XD

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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Ironmonger on Sun Sep 09, 2012 2:34 pm

@Kippershy


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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Tytan on Sun Sep 09, 2012 2:35 pm

Somber wrote:Thank you. And thank you every pony for your feedback. It really means a ton to me. Even more than donations in the tip jar... knowing this story matters to you makes it matter to me.

And sorry for messing with your head. Goddess is not nice. She took out all her nice. Now nasty is all that's left...

Does that mean that there's a version of Lacunae out there that is the happiest pony of Happytown? I keep having this image of Alicorns that embody the very essence of various unhelpful (to the goddess) emotions. Like one that's filled rage, or another that's lust (Probably looks like Princess Molestia). One for each of the deadly sins perhaps (collect the whole set!)?

Also please don't take it that I don't like Horizons for making me feel like Blackjacks guts in the screaming room, I actually like it more than a lot of professionally published work.
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Kippershy on Sun Sep 09, 2012 2:37 pm

CamoBadger wrote:lol Kipper, don't scare him off yet XD



Spoiler:
What the say? Did you just say fuck me about? You
bitching a little? I’ll have you graduate I know top of my Seals in the
Navy Classes, and I’ve been raided in numerous Al Quaeda secret
involvements, and I have killed over 300 confirmations. I am a trained
gorilla. In warfare, I’m the sniper arm in the entire US force tops. You
are targeting me but I’m just another nothing. I will fuck you with
precision the wipes of which has never been liked before on this scene.
Earth, fuck my marking words. You can get away with thinking that shit
over me to the Internet? Fuck again, thinker. As we spy I am networking
my secret speaking across the trace and your IP is being prepared right
now so you better storm the maggots. The wipes that storms out of the
pathetic little thing. You call your life? You’re fucking dead kids. I
can be any time. I can weigh you in over seven hundred kills, and that’s
my bear hands. Not only am I extensively accessed by trains, but I have
no arms for combatting the entire arsenal United Stat
es, and I will use it to to wipe your miserable ass. You shit the
faceoff of the continent. If only you could have commented what unholy
cleverness your little “retribution” was about. To bring down upon you,
maybe you would have fucked your tongue. But you couldn’t, you didn’t,
and now you’re holding the pay, you goddamn idiot. I will drown in shit
fury. Sincerely, Your dead fucking kiddo
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Post by Ironmonger on Sun Sep 09, 2012 2:39 pm

Tytan wrote:Like one that's filled rage, or another that's lust (Probably looks like Princess Molestia)

DAMNIT YOU ACCIDENTALLY MY WHOLE MIND CAN'T UNSEE 404 ERROR HNNNNNNNG...maybe one thats both? Big mac

And then the randomness train ground to a halt.

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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Kippershy on Sun Sep 09, 2012 2:39 pm

Tytan wrote:
Somber wrote:Thank you. And thank you every pony for your feedback. It really means a ton to me. Even more than donations in the tip jar... knowing this story matters to you makes it matter to me.

And sorry for messing with your head. Goddess is not nice. She took out all her nice. Now nasty is all that's left...

Does that mean that there's a version of Lacunae out there that is the happiest pony of Happytown? I keep having this image of Alicorns that embody the very essence of various unhelpful (to the goddess) emotions. Like one that's filled rage, or another that's lust (Probably looks like Princess Molestia). One for each of the deadly sins perhaps (collect the whole set!)?

Also please don't take it that I don't like Horizons for making me feel like Blackjacks guts in the screaming room, I actually like it more than a lot of professionally published work.

Actually, I can't remember where I read it, but someone DID portray just that.

There's one alicorn sitting in the manehattan crater (filled with radiation) with constant rage that just smashes everything she sees.
There's one alicorn sitting in some cave that just rubs herself off on all the walls and such because she's the lust dump.
I think there's another alicorn that does something else, but don't remember.

Anyway, it isn't canon, but there is a fic or something out there that says about that, lol.
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Post by Tytan on Sun Sep 09, 2012 2:42 pm

@Ironmonger

Think about it real careful. Do you really want a dominatrix Molestia?

Me thinks not. ->http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nCXlL2MgIxA&feature=related


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Post by Kippershy on Sun Sep 09, 2012 2:46 pm

Unrelated to everything:

Today I learnt that when you get a splinter that goes through the bottom of your finger and inserts itself to the bone of your middle knuckle...
Oh god does it hurt to:

1. Clasp your hand
2. Take it out.



I had a splinter go from under the knuckle into my finger and make its way between the joint.
You cannot imagine the amount of blood that went everywhere. There was a damned lot, especially for such a small wound.

Still, I'd prefer that fucker any day of the week over the time I had a splinter under my eyelid which threatened to (and almost did) pierce through into my eye.
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Post by Tytan on Sun Sep 09, 2012 2:50 pm

@kippershy

I had a splinter in my eye once. It's kind of hard to explain, but me and my dad were driving with the top down when all of a sudden my eye started hurting like someone had stabbed me in it.

Long story short; One bottle of saline, lots of tears, and a trip to the optometrist later we got it out and I was all kinds of happy. (What stunned me was that it was the size of... something embarrassingly small to get stuck in your eye and cause that much pain.)


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Post by Ironmonger on Sun Sep 09, 2012 2:52 pm

Kippershy wrote:Unrelated to everything:

Today I learnt that when you get a splinter that goes through the bottom of your finger and inserts itself to the bone of your middle knuckle...
Oh god does it hurt to:

1. Clasp your hand
2. Take it out.



I had a splinter go from under the knuckle into my finger and make its way between the joint.
You cannot imagine the amount of blood that went everywhere. There was a damned lot, especially for such a small wound.

Still, I'd prefer that fucker any day of the week over the time I had a splinter under my eyelid which threatened to (and almost did) pierce through into my eye.

That is disturbing. Honestly I sometimes think "I'm unsure if he lacks farsight somewhere or just unfortunate." UH..UH NO OFFENSE.

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Post by Ketchup on Sun Sep 09, 2012 2:55 pm

I'm going to start reading now, finally got back home. It took an extra half hour to leave for lunch, then we shopped for shoes for my sister for 2 hours. Then my other sister wanted to buy something and we stopped somewhere else, too. Was supposed to be back in an hour, and it took 4.
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Post by Kippershy on Sun Sep 09, 2012 3:02 pm

Tytan wrote:@kippershy

I had a splinter in my eye once. It's kind of hard to explain, but me and my dad were driving with the top down when all of a sudden my eye started hurting like someone had stabbed me in it.

Long story short; One bottle of saline, lots of tears, and a trip to the optometrist later we got it out and I was all kinds of happy. (What stunned me was that it was the size of... something embarrassingly small to get stuck in your eye and cause that much pain.)

Oh fuck, you know where it's at.
I didn't cry personally, but then, long story short, I've been hit by cars, had my foot crushed by something weighing over a ton (literally), dented my leg and lots more little things.

The piece I got in my eye was also extremely small. Tiniest little thing, though that's what really makes it so easy to get it caught under the eyelid and makes it so dangerous, I suppose.
Definitely the worst pain in my entire life, despite rating it 7 out of 10 to the nurse at A&E.

How long did you have to wait to get yours out?
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Post by Ironmonger on Sun Sep 09, 2012 3:10 pm

Tytan wrote:@Ironmonger

Think about it real careful. Do you really want a dominatrix Molestia?

Me thinks not. ->http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nCXlL2MgIxA&feature=related

...Maybe

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