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Post by WavemasterRyx on Fri May 25, 2012 6:45 am

Happy (early) Birthday, Somber!


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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by SilentCarto on Fri May 25, 2012 7:37 am

NoodleNugget wrote:an interesting ship. though I thought psychoshy more interested in stallions with less skin
not a fan of the choice of words for styggie.
Not really, she's more looking for acceptance and purpose in whatever shape it takes. I'm not saying she has to ship with anyone, but she seems to have become attached to Rampage for the moment -- she let Rampage hug her during "Together Forever", then apparently went and cried on her shoulder for a few hours (for certain values of 'her'... since Officer Softheart appears to have taken over at that point.)

WavemasterRyx wrote:Happy (early) Birthday, Somber!
D'awww! Empress Snack Cake is a generous monarch.
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Somber on Fri May 25, 2012 9:16 am

Thanks folks. Unfortunately a really bad tooth has prompted me to take more temp work, so by the time I get home I'm just creatively meh. Something about Stygius though is his cutie mark is a shield. He wants to protect the ones he loves. Psychoshy might be physically capable, but she's emotionally a wreck.

Also, thanks so much for the muffins.
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by NoodleNugget on Fri May 25, 2012 10:26 am

SilentCarto wrote:Not really, she's more looking for acceptance and purpose in whatever shape it takes. I'm not saying she has to ship with anyone, but she seems to have become attached to Rampage for the moment -- she let Rampage hug her during "Together Forever", then apparently went and cried on her shoulder for a few hours (for certain values of 'her'... since Officer Softheart appears to have taken over at that point.)

then it looks like she would take more solace with Rampage than with Stygius. Stygius probably won't like her either, most likely from hearing about her from blackjack's stories. probably wont paint her in the most attractive color.
"yeah we had that fight one time and she nearly strangled me, then later on she killed some of my friends while she was running around with her undead wannabe daddy, not to mention i have no doubt that she is going to betray me at some point given the fact that before i left my friends to let them take a break she painted a target around me practically giving away my location to the seekers."
Somber wrote:

Thanks folks. Unfortunately a really bad tooth has prompted me to take more temp work, so by the time I get home I'm just creatively meh. Something about Stygius though is his cutie mark is a shield. He wants to protect the ones he loves. Psychoshy might be physically capable, but she's emotionally a wreck.

Also, thanks so much for the muffins.

probably got it from all those muffins.


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Post by swicked on Fri May 25, 2012 11:06 am

Noodle.
As long as she's pretty (to him) I'm certain he won't care. He didn't particularly care about BJ's story. She was nice, so whatever she'd done or been through was not important to his overall opinion of her.
So, if anything, it'll be her attitude that kills it. Not that I don't think your ship won't work out, after all, somber just indirectly endorsed it and fluttershy was a model in the mlp world so psycho's gonna have to be pretty darn awful to try and offset her looks in Styg's eyes.

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Post by Kattlarv on Fri May 25, 2012 11:28 am

Hum, have to say today was a bit of a strain. Ran into someone I technically got sexually abused by, if I recall the meaning of the term... talk about... irony? Would that be the term? (since it was basically what I was arguing against/for) Anyhow, I think she accepted my apology, so hopefully I can put that behind me as well.

@Robo: (tears) Hey! What's that supposed to mean? I usually teach ton of... useless, unimportant and irrelevant... stuff... yeah... xD

@O.Hinds: (Styg) That's mostly the part that kerfaffles me. If his culture ain't got shit on sex ed, how can he be so "forward" with flirting? And while I know he'd have had to grab the board to ask "was it good for you to?" it kinda seems like something a virgin would. To at least get confirmation that they did a decent job, if they cared that is.

@Mobi: (Ph sex) I have an urge to slap you with a spatula for some of the statements, but not being sure of the exact terms you meant to use, I will refrain from it. That, and knowing I've misread and forgotten stuff before.

@Somber: (B-day) Can't really offer more than a grats in a few days... well, at least not anything I can offer that'll you'll like/want ^^'

(Psycho being a wreck) I don't see how that would be a problem, at all. Going with some prior things/events.

@Sindri: (Psycho/Styg) ... yeah, should definitely stay away from my work then xD Not that you are there in the first place, but eh xP

@Overall Styg shipping: As long as it's not family, has more than two orifices, and lets him in, he doesn't really seem to mind/ask for more. And I almost felt bad for saying that... (Oh, and as long as they're not directly evil can be added thankfully.)
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by RoboRed on Fri May 25, 2012 12:19 pm

Mobius04 wrote:Is there an conjecture over how life has been for the rest of the party? Think they have had a nice quiet time or the Hoof has been making their life miserable?
Not sure. I speculate that they're still en-route to Chapel (if not there already), they're worried sick about Blackjack, and Glory is giving occasional treatment to P-21 and Scotch.

Of course, things could always go horribly wrong... Crazy

NoodleNugget wrote:dont forget Boo is building her cakefort inside their home
and psychoshy is grumbling at the thought of blackjack


or it's like how I imagined and the seekers followed them home, cornered them, and killed all and strung them up on display for blackjack except for Scotch and Boo(who were hiding)(they kidnap rampage after noticing her regeneration powers)
Crazy

WavemasterRyx wrote:
-I was lieing... I totally freaked out for about half a minute before I got it under control.
*hugs fuzzy Silver Spoon again*
TBH, every "OH SHIT" alarm was going off in my head when I read Random's post that morning. Good to see you're doing alright, though. Twilight Sparkle

Moodyman90 wrote:Non-canon prediction!
While Blackjack was gone Boo turned into a replica of Blackjack, but more mentally stable and well adjusted.

OBJECTION! It is physically impossible for any form of stable Blackjack to even exist!

NoodleNugget wrote:
@the whole mommy blackjack discussion
I think it would be interesting. mama bear blackjack wouldn't be trying to fight for a place that was just better, she'd fight for a place that was good enough for her child. and everyone knows you don't f*ck with a mama bear.
(so many links)
I'm really torn about the idea. Part of me can't see it happening. On the other hand though, it would be COMPLETELY "D'awwww"-worthy. Maybe it could be an epilogue piece if Blackjack makes it through this whole ordeal in the end...

(Also, damn you for roping me into TVTropes.)

Somber wrote:
jacky2734 wrote:Um, if you don't mind me asking, how's the next chapter coming along?

I'm at page 12 of 2nd of 5 scenes planned. So probably not this weekend. Monday is my Birthday anyway so we'll be doing something, whether I want it or not.
Happy Birthday in advance, Somber! Queen Pinkie Pie

SilentCarto wrote:Thank you to everyone who complimented the scenes I wrote! If you jostle my brain just right, more might fall out sometime...
Rattle rattle.

NoodleNugget wrote:
an interesting ship. though I thought psychoshy more interested in stallions with less skin
not a fan of the choice of words for styggie.

you know what, f*ck it, ship him with everybody, simultaneously. the stud can handle it.
Styggie gets all the mares.

WavemasterRyx wrote:Happy (early) Birthday, Somber!


Heh, yeah my pen's dieing, I'm in trouble.
D'awww...... Rainbow
(sorry to hear about your pen/tablet/thingus)
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Sindri on Fri May 25, 2012 12:28 pm

WavemasterRyx wrote:Happy (early) Birthday, Somber!
SQUEEEE-
Ahem.
Somberpony is cutest smartest all around best pony.
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Aonee on Fri May 25, 2012 12:29 pm

Sindri wrote:
WavemasterRyx wrote:Happy (early) Birthday, Somber!
SQUEEEE-
Ahem.
Somberpony is cutest smartest all around best pony.
Yes! Happy B-Day somber, spend it doing things you enjoy.
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by swicked on Fri May 25, 2012 12:40 pm

Kattlarv wrote:
@Somber: (B-day) Can't really offer more than a grats in a few days... well, at least not anything I can offer that'll you'll like/want ^^'

Ditto! I mean, I could write a poem or something, but I dunno what it would be about, specifically. The legend of Somber, author of heroes? Somber's first day in the wasteland? An extension to Duel with the Dealer? I would probably need to be something you'd actually like XD

Oh, but I remember you saying you enjoyed that story contest a while ago. Should we have another one?

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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Sindri on Fri May 25, 2012 12:46 pm

swicked wrote:
I'm afraid I'd have to opt out of judging this time.
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Post by Aonee on Fri May 25, 2012 12:50 pm

swicked wrote:
Oh, but I remember you saying you enjoyed that story contest a while ago. Should we have another one?
I know! We could hold a contest, and the theme is Somber getting a b-day party, thrown by with the PH cast or the PHCC.
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Post by swicked on Fri May 25, 2012 1:05 pm

Sindri wrote:
swicked wrote:
I'm afraid I'd have to opt out of judging this time.

I don't think judging should be necessary. Short stories could just be submitted following a rough theme. More of a writing challenge than anything, really.

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Post by Meleagridis on Fri May 25, 2012 1:46 pm

Aonee wrote: I know! We could hold a contest, and the theme is Somber getting a b-day party, thrown by with the PH cast or the PHCC.
Support support support support support
It's either this or we all sign a card or both.


With his buttmark identified as having more to do with protecting others than being tough or literally good with a shield or something, I think it's impossible for him to not try and join the group. I'm jumping to a conclusion by just assuming he's altruistic to a fault, yes... but if I'm in any way right, the only way BJ and co. could get rid of him would be to find an even more messed up band of wasteland wanderers. ...Or he could get himself killed. I'm suddenly very nervous.
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Sindri on Fri May 25, 2012 1:53 pm

Meleagridis wrote:
Yep. He'll join the party, join the defenders of Chapel, or get himself killed fighting Steel Rain to protect Blackjack.
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Kippershy on Fri May 25, 2012 2:13 pm

So, I didn't get to post this earlier due to connection, but last night I had a dream involving you Somber.

I don't remember the first half but the second half we were in this human zoo thing, where humans were collected.
You were this frightened tall but skinny guy and you didn't have the confidence to make it alone, so I promised to get you out of there.

Then we transformed into animals and you became a hare while I became a tortoise.
I led you to presumed safety until we got caught by the big bad zoo keeper who turned into a gorilla, who was at the exit I'd planned to use because everyone got the same idea as me.

I called out your name (Somber, not D) and told you to hide behind this bush while I turned back into a human and smacked the fuck out of the gorilla while everyone stared in awe.
I literally just powerhoused the gorilla into the ground and then some. and then someone else from the P.H gang called your name, but I have no clue who it was but I'm going to assume it was Waves.
Anyway, they called your name and helped you up over the security wall, I then proceeded to help them up and over and I don't think I managed to do it myself.

Then the dream ended, but I was happy because I got you out, at least.
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Post by Scyto Harmony on Fri May 25, 2012 2:18 pm

Kippershy wrote:So, I didn't get to post this earlier due to connection, but last night I had a dream involving you Somber.

I don't remember the first half but the second half we were in this human zoo thing, where humans were collected.
You were this frightened tall but skinny guy and you didn't have the confidence to make it alone, so I promised to get you out of there.

Then we transformed into animals and you became a hare while I became a tortoise.
I led you to presumed safety until we got caught by the big bad zoo keeper who turned into a gorilla, who was at the exit I'd planned to use because everyone got the same idea as me.

I called out your name (Somber, not D) and told you to hide behind this bush while I turned back into a human and smacked the fuck out of the gorilla while everyone stared in awe.
I literally just powerhoused the gorilla into the ground and then some. and then someone else from the P.H gang called your name, but I have no clue who it was but I'm going to assume it was Waves.
Anyway, they called your name and helped you up over the security wall, I then proceeded to help them up and over and I don't think I managed to do it myself.

Then the dream ended, but I was happy because I got you out, at least.

Best dream ever.
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Rboy474 on Fri May 25, 2012 3:54 pm

Meleagridis wrote:


With his buttmark identified as having more to do with protecting others than being tough or literally good with a shield or something, I think it's impossible for him to not try and join the group. I'm jumping to a conclusion by just assuming he's altruistic to a fault, yes... but if I'm in any way right, the only way BJ and co. could get rid of him would be to find an even more messed up band of wasteland wanderers. ...Or he could get himself killed. I'm suddenly very nervous.

Great now you have me worried and I was already worried what Glory was gonna do to the Bat Stud.
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Post by Valikdu on Fri May 25, 2012 4:01 pm

NoodleNugget wrote:dont forget Boo is building her cakefort inside their home
and psychoshy is grumbling at the thought of blackjack

cake fort...e?
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Post by swicked on Fri May 25, 2012 4:30 pm

Red lobster standing by.
Come in cake fort, over.

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Post by Rboy474 on Fri May 25, 2012 4:31 pm

swicked wrote:Red lobster standing by.
Come in cake fort, over.

Damit now I'm hungry *proceeds on quest to find munchies*
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Post by Aonee on Fri May 25, 2012 4:38 pm

This is cake fort, we hear you loud and clear red lobster. Go on.
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Post by Overlong Analysis Cobalt on Fri May 25, 2012 5:36 pm

@Somber
Happy birthday-in-threeish-days, Somber! And don't worry about the chapter if you've got dental work what needs doing.

@WavemasterRyx
D'aww... I think Somberpony might be more adorable than Boopony in this picture.

@Everypony
Hey guys, Trueblood was totally working on "insecticide talismans" for Goldenblood. (Wasn't too pleased about it, either) So yeah, that's scary.
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Valikdu on Fri May 25, 2012 6:01 pm

Some idiot removed "insignificant fanfiction" from the list of the longest novels. And apparently, keeps doing it.


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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Mobius04 on Fri May 25, 2012 6:03 pm

Valikdu wrote:Some idiot removed "insignificant fanfiction" from the list of the longest novels. And apparently, keeps doing it.



Then we will put it back. I plan on being alive for the next 50 years or so. We'll see who is the last one standing.

@Somber:
Happy Birthday! *Raises a Glass* Here is to all the good things you have put into the world and to many years of good work to come.

@Stygilious' cutie mark
Hmm. This brings up the question of what act of defending loved ones earned him the cutie mark in the first place. Reading into it, that would imply he has some level of empathy that goes above and beyond that of the standard wastelander. This can be seen in the fact that he took a great deal of fire from the sprite bots to better ensure the well being of BJ. In my experience, Valor like that isn't displayed by people who are selfish and cowardly. It means that Stygious is likely a person who sees value in other people and willing to take selfless action to keep them safe. Perhaps there are scrubs who can fake that, but I personally haven't met them. Given how frequently Valor like that comes hand and hand with compassion and understanding. Say what you will about they guy being clueless, but he has enough heart for me to think well of him.
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by CamoBadger on Fri May 25, 2012 8:47 pm

WavemasterRyx wrote:Happy (early) Birthday, Somber!


Heh, yeah my pen's dieing, I'm in trouble.
Holy crap that's adorable...

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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by FeatherDust on Fri May 25, 2012 9:19 pm

Hey everyone! First post on Project Horizons here. I've been catching up to current and I'm almost there. I just finished 42. I'm doing my best not to read any posts until I finish 44 sometime this weekend, but I had a comment I wanted to make.

This is kind of a comment for Somber:
I really am enjoying the story, but there was one thing in 42 that I thought could really use some editing work, and that's the entry into the zebra compound. It's just not very clear what's happening, in my opinion, between climbing through the fence and reaching the door.

The biggest problem is the "High Explosive" box. It's mentioned in one line while BJ is looking through her rifle scope, then we have BJ and Bluebell having a long discussion for nearly two pages before it comes up again. They sneak through the fence; we have a description of the raider style decor, and then a bullet pings off a nearby rail (which implied to me that they're still at the fence); and then one line later she's at the explosive box, which by now I'd mostly forgotten about.

I think there first needs to be a paragraph, or at least a few lines, about the move from the fence to where the bomb is; and either in there or right after it, there should be a re-setting of the scene, talking about the piles of glowing ash and the weapon before BJ grabs the strap and walks off with it and attracts the attention of both sides of the fire fight.
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Mobius04 on Fri May 25, 2012 9:22 pm

FeatherDust wrote:
Welcome to the forums! Glad that you are enjoying PH and looking forward to having you in the discussion.
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by O. Hinds on Fri May 25, 2012 9:39 pm

FeatherDust wrote:I really am enjoying the story, but there was one thing in 42 that I thought could really use some editing work, and that's the entry into the zebra compound. It's just not very clear what's happening, in my opinion, between climbing through the fence and reaching the door.

The biggest problem is the "High Explosive" box. It's mentioned in one line while BJ is looking through her rifle scope, then we have BJ and Bluebell having a long discussion for nearly two pages before it comes up again. They sneak through the fence; we have a description of the raider style decor, and then a bullet pings off a nearby rail (which implied to me that they're still at the fence); and then one line later she's at the explosive box, which by now I'd mostly forgotten about.

I think there first needs to be a paragraph, or at least a few lines, about the move from the fence to where the bomb is; and either in there or right after it, there should be a re-setting of the scene, talking about the piles of glowing ash and the weapon before BJ grabs the strap and walks off with it and attracts the attention of both sides of the fire fight.
Hm... Sorry, but it looks okay to me, and no one else has complained.

Also, welcome!
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Admiral Stoic Rum on Fri May 25, 2012 11:11 pm

I have this wonderful idea about a short fiction shot of... well I don't wanna spoil it too mcuh, but anyway it would give lfluttershy an old friend back...and I love it! oneshot ish thingy
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