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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.

Post by Kippershy on Tue May 28, 2013 3:40 pm

Actually, why not. It'll be good to have two people who know the character & their relationship.
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Post by Kippershy on Tue Jun 04, 2013 5:46 pm

That moment when.. that feel when...

-You realise Cherry is older than Crimson
-That they will grow old together, deeply in love through the years
-Their love will make them inseparable (metaphorically)
-One of them will eventually die of old age before the other
-The term other half wasn't just a phrase meaning to be in a relationship, but rather a very literal sense of the other part of who they've become
-They will be missing a part of who they are without their lover
-They will wait out the rest of their days forever wishing they could be reunited if only for long enough to utter one more 'I love you'
-Only once their souls meet will they ever truly be whole again

That feel

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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.

Post by Kippershy on Sat Jun 08, 2013 1:41 pm

So this time I actually have something new for anyone who checks the thread out.
No, unfortunately it isn't the revised chapter two...
Not yet anyway, though while I'm on that topic, that's 4.1k in now.

Nope, I've got this to show you.

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Post by swicked on Sat Jun 08, 2013 1:52 pm

Kippershy wrote:That moment when.. that feel when...

-You realise Cherry is older than Crimson
-That they will grow old together, deeply in love through the years
-Their love will make them inseparable (metaphorically)
-One of them will eventually die of old age before the other
-The term other half wasn't just a phrase meaning to be in a relationship, but rather a very literal sense of the other part of who they've become
-They will be missing a part of who they are without their lover
-They will wait out the rest of their days forever wishing they could be reunited if only for long enough to utter one more 'I love you'
-Only once their souls meet will they ever truly be whole again

That feel
That feel when you don't have proper feelings Spike
In any case, seriously, I only know one person more of a hopeless romantic than you are... though he directs that toward his actual (constantly failing) relationships, not an ideal one in his head, so I'm not sure who's really worse, here XD

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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.

Post by Kippershy on Sat Jun 08, 2013 3:00 pm

swicked wrote:
Kippershy wrote:That moment when.. that feel when...

-You realise Cherry is older than Crimson
-That they will grow old together, deeply in love through the years
-Their love will make them inseparable (metaphorically)
-One of them will eventually die of old age before the other
-The term other half wasn't just a phrase meaning to be in a relationship, but rather a very literal sense of the other part of who they've become
-They will be missing a part of who they are without their lover
-They will wait out the rest of their days forever wishing they could be reunited if only for long enough to utter one more 'I love you'
-Only once their souls meet will they ever truly be whole again

That feel
That feel when you don't have proper feelings
In any case, seriously, I only know one person more of a hopeless romantic than you are... though he directs that toward his actual (constantly failing) relationships, not an ideal one in his head, so I'm not sure who's really worse, here XD

For me, the reason I've turned to the relationship from my story is because what relationships I did have in the past were utterly horrible. I mean, I loved them when they were good (mainly because my undying hopeless romantic made me think things were utterly awesome regardless) but the way each has ended alongside my upbringing has been utterly devastating.
So... fanfic relationships it is for me to keep myself happy in the romance department for the time being.

Lot less pain when you control how it'll all turn out.
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Post by Admiral Stoic Rum on Sat Jun 08, 2013 9:20 pm

I'm buzzed right now wanna get plastered when I get home anyone wanna play tf2 on normal mode when I get home?
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Post by Admiral Stoic Rum on Sun Jun 09, 2013 12:14 am

Admiral Stoic Rum wrote:I'm buzzed right now wanna get plastered when I get home anyone wanna play tf2 on normal mode when I get home?

hahaha meant to put this in the chat thread.. on a mobile its hard to get the right ones
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.

Post by Plasticube on Wed Jun 12, 2013 3:20 pm

Had some free time so i finally caught up with this story.

Spoiler:


Got a new laptop to replace the old broken one, working through my post unemployment art-block so nothing fancy


If everyone in the forum hadn't commented that it gets better after the first few chapters I probably would have stopped reading, but it does get better, keep up the good work :)

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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.

Post by Ketchup on Wed Jun 12, 2013 3:29 pm

Plasticube wrote:
Spoiler:

Got a new laptop to replace the old broken one, working through my post unemployment art-block so nothing fancy


Very nice, I'm sure Kipper will love that.
Crimson is black, though I think I like the tan colour more.
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.

Post by Kippershy on Wed Jun 12, 2013 5:16 pm

*Grabs Plasticube and hugs 'em so tight that they can't breathe and then only realises just before they pass out*
I have no way to describe how much I love this picture.
And I agree, Ketchup, Tan would have made a much better choice.

I've said it a few times elsewhere, that if I had the ability to go back and tell myself to redesign the colour scheme before I had all the pictures done, I would. Tan would've been the best looking option ever, by the looks of things.
God damn it. haha.

Seriously though. GHTGHVBNTJFWJRNHDVJURVJUJVMSJ
ALL OF MY HAPPINESS. I HAVE IT BACK NAO.
<3333333333333333
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Post by Plasticube on Wed Jun 12, 2013 7:03 pm

That was a mistake on my part, i picked a light gray shade for his coat, it turned out tan on that paper ._.

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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.

Post by Kippershy on Wed Jun 12, 2013 7:07 pm

Huh, strange how that kind've stuff happens. Still adore it to pieces, completely.
The helmet kind've reminds me of the ones in Kerbal Space Programme so that's an even bigger win right there.
Thank you for the picture =3
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.

Post by Kippershy on Mon Jun 24, 2013 5:17 am

I've been way too slow with this... so I'm gonna throw it out here and  here alone.
Anyone who wants to keep up with progress on chapter two, feel free to check it at any time. Currently around 5,450 words, planning to get some more done tomorrow.
I don't normally do this, but it's been so long without any new stuff and I'm getting that damn feeling of not doing enough, not giving enough and not having enough motivation because of that and the lack of feedback that comes with it.
So I'm not forcing anyone to read this prior to it's proper release, I'm just saying you can if you want.
Hopefully the idea of it being public motivates me to do it.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hZxy_XUVI8rHfJ9eosK7bjRHq01FwLCrq85V3h0Qg5A/edit
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Post by Kippershy on Thu Jun 27, 2013 9:23 pm

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Post by Kippershy on Thu Jun 27, 2013 10:55 pm

And now these two arrive too!
And now I got to sleep!


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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.

Post by Kippershy on Tue Jul 02, 2013 4:41 am

On a bad note, I've still got hardly any writing done because I've been constantly tired from work and feeling belugh.
On a good note, I've seen some unexpected positive comments that gave me a little bit of spirit back.
On an even better note... I have some spoiler art for chapter twenty two...

Be warned, this really is spoiler.

Spoiler:
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.

Post by CamoBadger on Tue Jul 02, 2013 12:07 pm

Kippershy wrote:On a bad note, I've still got hardly any writing done because I've been constantly tired from work and feeling belugh.
On a good note, I've seen some unexpected positive comments that gave me a little bit of spirit back.
On an even better note... I have some spoiler art for chapter twenty two...

Be warned, this really is spoiler.

Spoiler:
Lol yissssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

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Until next time, hugs and kisses.


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Post by Kippershy on Tue Jul 02, 2013 4:26 pm

Opened the spoler much?
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Post by CamoBadger on Tue Jul 02, 2013 4:30 pm

Instantly.

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Post by Ketchup on Tue Jul 02, 2013 4:44 pm

I'm just wondering how that's a spoiler. Hmm. Doesn't look very important.
But it's nice.
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Post by Kippershy on Tue Jul 02, 2013 4:55 pm

Ketchup wrote:I'm just wondering how that's a spoiler. Hmm. Doesn't look very important.
But it's nice.

 Well, it's not really all that important, but...
Spoiler:
Oh come on! He's reading them bed time stories! Something THAT adorable that isn't released yet has gotta be in spoilers! I mean, just imagine them all tucked in bed, eager for Crimson to read them one or two foals tales simply because. And you know Eos would simply die for that kiss on the forehead when the story ends.
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Post by Ketchup on Tue Jul 02, 2013 4:59 pm

Kippershy wrote:
Ketchup wrote:I'm just wondering how that's a spoiler. Hmm. Doesn't look very important.
But it's nice.

 Well, it's not really all that important, but...
Spoiler:
Oh come on! He's reading them bed time stories! Something THAT adorable that isn't released yet has gotta be in spoilers! I mean, just imagine them all tucked in bed, eager for Crimson to read them one or two foals tales simply because. And you know Eos would simply die for that kiss on the forehead when the story ends.
Heh. In this case, yeah, I guess a spoiler is warranted.
It's adorable, certainly.
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Post by Kippershy on Thu Jul 11, 2013 6:22 pm

Anyone possibly wanna do me a favour like none other?
I'm pretty sure I added a part in the story where I had Cherry admit she's fancied Crimson since before chapter one, Camo thinks so too, but I can't find it. Anyone else remember if I added it in or not?
Is it just something I planned to add?
Anyone who finds it if I did add it in, will earn my undying love.
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Post by Ketchup on Thu Jul 11, 2013 7:01 pm

Bingo, I think. Chapter 16.
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Kippershy wrote:Now I was really confused. She had explained some things, but others completely baffled me. "Wait. If that's true, why don't I remember having seen you before? I mean, a mare of your beauty? Even with how I found my entertainment and things to do during my free time, I haven't gotten to the point where I can't remember who I've been with so I don't see why I would forget such a beautiful mare like you."
With that she blushed and let out a small smile as she sniffled, looking up at me as she did.
"I was always too... nervous? No, not nervous. Shy perhaps? I suppose. I was always too shy to let you see me. You were always 'the overmare's son, my designated target to protect'. Not somepony I should've been introducing myself to."
"Why did you introduce yourself to me then?" I asked. "In the end, I mean."
Cherry blushed and pulled away a little more with that, until I pulled her face back up to mine with my hoof that was.
"It was because you spotted me before I could hide again, actually. Using my magic takes a lot of effort to go truly invisible, so I use one of my other spells that simply makes my coat and mane into the same colour and pattern as something I want to blend with... only that's no use when the backdrop is the sky and not the security wall. So yeah, I had no time to hide from you, as silly as that sounds. Then you called me beautiful and I was taken back by it all and... let myself go with the moment."
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Post by Kippershy on Thu Jul 11, 2013 7:05 pm

I FUCKING LOVE YOU.
YOU HAVE NO IDEA. I DO I DO I DOOOO.
<3 I seriously love you, Ketch.
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Post by Kippershy on Thu Jul 11, 2013 7:16 pm

My fucking face when you did this for me Ketch:
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Post by Ketchup on Thu Jul 11, 2013 7:23 pm

It's no big deal. If you ever want anything else along those lines done, I could do it for you. Or at all, really. I like helping authors.
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Post by Kippershy on Thu Jul 11, 2013 7:26 pm

It just means a lot to me. I'm tired as all hell and the little things like these can really, really upset me and wind me up if I'm not 100% sure I added them in.
I was getting really worried that I had planned to, wanted to, but never done so, and my hour of searching got me nowhere.
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Broken Bonds.

Post by Kippershy on Mon Jul 15, 2013 2:51 pm

So, instead of working on the rewrite of chapter two... I just spent roughly two hours (5:25pm-7:35pm) writing a clop fic using Broken Bonds material (non canon) which knocked up a good 2,746 words. (2,757 according to Fimfic)
...All because the 4chan thread was saying they wanted/we need more FOE clop.



I've submitted it as a new story branch over on FF but of course, that'll take time before that goes online, if it even is accepted at first. (Which I don't see why it shouldn't be. Made sure to notch it up for what it is.)

And I know that I'm not allowed to link anyone to the G.doc publicly... but if anyone wants to see what I wrote, in all it's raw goodness, let me know.

The story is now live over on Fimfiction. While I probably shouldn't link it even still, you CAN easily find it by checking out my main story page - there'll be a link to it on the right as one of my other stories.
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Post by Kippershy on Tue Jul 23, 2013 4:36 pm



CHAPTER TWO REWRITTEN AND NOW RELEASED
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