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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Dutcher on Fri Aug 01, 2014 11:32 am

FeatherDust wrote:
Dutcher wrote:The cliff hanger is so brutal.. I can't take it anymore.
What's so brutal about it?  Obviously Dawn would think Blackjack is a possibly-crazy imitator who's actually come into her home.  On top of that she's hurt and angry at Cogjack (who she still thinks is the real Blackjack), so she's in no mood to be gentle with the intruder.

I'm hoping Blackjack just opens by saying their bedroom safeword.  Maybe not enough to prove her identity, but definitely weird and private enough to get a hearing...
I'm not talking about the outcome, of course glory will understand. Still I want to read the reaction. especially since its been 3 months not including cogs and is bound to be hilarious.(also remembering the previous encounter where Bj cheated)
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Vinylshadow on Fri Aug 01, 2014 1:36 pm

Not sure how an imitator would know their safe word

...Pineapple?
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Retl on Fri Aug 01, 2014 1:41 pm

I'm pretty partial to the safe-word idea, Dustydusterfluffs! It'll be interesting to see if that comes up or not.
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Guest on Fri Aug 01, 2014 1:44 pm

Retl wrote:It'll be interesting to see if that comes up or not.

Why? Sounds like that's good for one joke.

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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Vinylshadow on Fri Aug 01, 2014 1:58 pm

One joke, or one sure-fire way to prove to Glory that Blackjack is...well...Blackjack
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by swicked on Fri Aug 01, 2014 4:12 pm

Harmony Ltd. wrote:Idea I toss in the idea bin, for those who may want to try writing it *glances toward swicked*:

Family week-end dinner between Fluttershy, Goldenblood, Whisper and Stygius, Tenebra, Stygius-mom and Stygius-Dad. Possibly with Velvet Remedy, Calamity, Ditzy, Lion (and Mouse) and Silver Bell invited.

Featuring awkward conversations, and adults trying not to speak about politics, and failing miserably.
Not to criticize, but two things:
1. That is a lot of characters to keep track of.
2. Politics of what? I'm drawing a blank here. Just monarchy vs. Democracy/Republic or something?

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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Vinylshadow on Fri Aug 01, 2014 4:22 pm

Society politic vs Enclave politics vs Reaper politics

That sort of thing
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Harmony Ltd. on Fri Aug 01, 2014 5:04 pm

swicked wrote:
Harmony Ltd. wrote:Idea I toss in the idea bin, for those who may want to try writing it *glances toward swicked*:

Family week-end dinner between Fluttershy, Goldenblood, Whisper and Stygius, Tenebra, Stygius-mom and Stygius-Dad. Possibly with Velvet Remedy, Calamity, Ditzy, Lion (and Mouse) and Silver Bell invited.

Featuring awkward conversations, and adults trying not to speak about politics, and failing miserably.
Not to criticize, but two things:
1. That is a lot of characters to keep track of.
2. Politics of what? I'm drawing a blank here. Just monarchy vs. Democracy/Republic or something?
Yeah, that's a lot of people. Let's just restrain it the two families: Fluttershy, Goldenblood, Whisper on one side, and Stygius, his sister, mother and father.

As for politics, that was more when the previous guests come into play, and related to my own "30 years later" headcanon. But that part is unimportant.

Mostly, the idea was a "clash" of dysfunctional families, trying to enjoy a bit of family time and not drown in awkwardness (of course, with Whisper doing her best to defeat their attempts  Applebloom )
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by swicked on Fri Aug 01, 2014 6:08 pm

Yes, for someone fundamentally unstable, Whisper is very good at staying on topic and focused.

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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by FeatherDust on Sat Aug 02, 2014 1:46 am

Silver136 wrote:*Glory
...yes.

Argh. This has just been my week for getting names wrong...
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Somber on Sat Aug 02, 2014 9:47 pm

This chapter is so bad... it's going to upset so many people...
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Retl on Sat Aug 02, 2014 9:48 pm

Upsetting things happen sometimes. Hopefully they'll be some neat bits in there too. In any case, thanks for working on it and sharing it! *Hug.*
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by WavemasterRyx on Sat Aug 02, 2014 9:54 pm

*hugs very gently* Just try to do the best you can, sir.
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Vexd on Sun Aug 03, 2014 12:46 am

Incoming increase in the body count
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by swicked on Sun Aug 03, 2014 1:20 am

This chapter is something. Definitely.
I'm having a lot of fun, per the norm. Spike 

I've got pages worth of outtakes at this point.

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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Dutcher on Sun Aug 03, 2014 1:59 am

Hype intensifies
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Heart of Blades on Sun Aug 03, 2014 2:20 am

Hey Somber, just wanted to say that whatever happens in this chapter, be it upsetting or otherwise; point is you've made me care!

From the start to all the way till now, you've made me care about the characters and about what happens.  I came to this party pretty late, started reading sometime after you posted chapter 63.  In that whole time I have felt so many emotion reading this.  It's made me laugh, cry, feel happy as well as crushing sadness; and that's simply because you made me care.  There's really only been one scene of one chapter that I wasn't happy with...I won't go into it because honestly it doesn't matter in the over all fic and the following chapter I felt addressed most if not all issues I had.  That's far more than I can say about most books/shows/movies/est

I really have no idea where this is all going, you've done a very impressive job of keeping me guessing.  But no matter what happens, I'm sure whatever emotions I feel will be very strong because you've made me care for Blackjack and her friends that much.

As far as I'm concerned, you're doing something right, so keep it up! :D
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Silver136 on Sun Aug 03, 2014 2:43 am

Somber wrote:This chapter is so bad... it's going to upset so many people...
Just because something's upsetting, that doesn't make it bad. Black was pretty upsetting, but it was still a good and interesting chapter.


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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Vexd on Sun Aug 03, 2014 2:49 am

swicked wrote:This chapter is something. Definitely.
I'm having a lot of fun, per the norm. Spike 

I've got pages worth of outtakes at this point.

Outtakes of fun and happiness, or death and destruction?
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Dutcher on Sun Aug 03, 2014 2:55 am

Somber wrote:This chapter is so bad... it's going to upset so many people...
I doubt it, its going to be awsome just like always :D
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by O. Hinds on Sun Aug 03, 2014 3:11 am

swicked wrote:I've got pages worth of outtakes at this point.
Ooh, I look forward to reading them.


And yes, the chapter... The problem is, I can't think of a good way to hype it without risking spoilers. :D
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by swicked on Sun Aug 03, 2014 3:12 am

O. Hinds wrote:
swicked wrote:I've got pages worth of outtakes at this point.
Ooh, I look forward to reading them.
You've read them. They're all the comments I keep making as observations that Somber doesn't end up accepting into the chapter.
You know, like the one about the crown! Twilight Sparkle

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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Somber on Sun Aug 03, 2014 3:24 am

The crown... why would it have four?!  She doesn't have that many holes!
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by O. Hinds on Sun Aug 03, 2014 3:43 am

swicked wrote:
O. Hinds wrote:
swicked wrote:I've got pages worth of outtakes at this point.
Ooh, I look forward to reading them.
You've read them. They're all the comments I keep making as observations that Somber doesn't end up accepting into the chapter.
You know, like the one about the crown! Twilight Sparkle
Ah, okay.

Somber wrote:The crown... why would it have four?!  She doesn't have that many holes!
...Please don't clarify that yet. I want to see people's speculations. :)
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Borsuq on Sun Aug 03, 2014 5:13 am

Somber wrote:This chapter is so bad... it's going to upset so many people...

Oh no... oh no ho no oh no! Please tell me this doesn't mean that Glory won't believe Blackjack!!! I mean, that would be just... cruel at this point!

On that note, kudos on making the scene that I had been waiting for the most for about half a year, of Blackjack and Glory reuniting, heartbreaking.

But, seriously, Glory should believe her, right? I mean, if Blackjack would start telling her and the others things, like: where they met, that she shot her, how Glory got branded, that BJ's real name is Go Fish, that she raped P-21 long ago, how she almost shot her because of a Dealer (who is a coward and a traitor!), that their first time was in her Stable, how she hurt her with the suicide attempt, that Scotch had peed in her bed but Bj took the blame (would be a nice time to bring that back, just sayind ;p), how Glory lost her wing... what else... Glory's reaction when she had returned after that thing with Stygius, what happened in Sociaty... And lets not forget that Homage is there too!

So I am probably panicking... though seriously, if her friends wouldn't believe her, that would be the most upseting thing. Ever. And while for a while every chapter caused me to be slightly depressed after reading it for about a day, as long as Blackjack and Glory will be together again, I don't care!... I'm about to be surprised, aren't I?

Maybe this supposedly upseting thing would be Rampage dying? Cause at this point I would quite cheerfully read that. Heck, stack her into a lubster costume and use nipple-tazers on her.

Also, since I had just realized that I didn't give my comment on the previous chapter, let me say a few things.

Blackjack is the only pony ever who would sentence somebody to death by kindness. And the only one that could probably accomplish that.

When the fight between her and Hades started, I looked at the scroll bar, to gauge how much more of the chapter was left. Saw it was more than 50 % - thought: "Wow, that guy is soooo f***ed!". I liked how she started, by spitting whiskey in his face, and it might be because I had been playing WoW as a monk at the time, but I had expected her to whip out a lighter and incinerate him... but eh, that would have been too easy. Still, she won using the bottle. That was cool. Go Whiskey Queen!

A, question: Why can't Blackjack teleport with Charm? She didn't seem to have that problem when teleporting with Boo.

Another nitpick: Blackjack had been observing everybody who had a PipBuck via that... that machine she got from Lighthooves' brother, don't remember the name. But she was watching pretty much all of Hoofington, and she never saw any of those cosplayers? And what about how Stygius went to check things out and returned reporting that Cogs was taking control over everything, couldn't he go: "Oh, and by the way, there's about a hundred of Blackjacks out there"? I mean, I just got a feeling as if that was thrown at the last minute to increase the drama.

As for Zodiac... it might sound weird, but I never really liked her. I didn't suspect her of working for either Cogs or Legate, but I just disliked her for some reason. Even after she gave her augmentations to Blackjack. So I'm okay with her being a dirty traitor and getting killed. And yes. I know that she had a rather good reason for turning traitor on Equestria, but while I am also pissed about that, I meant her turning traitor on Zodiacs, Collegiate and Blackjack. I still say that those that betray their friends are the worst. Which circle of hell is for betrayers, btw? It's been a while since I played Dante's Inferno... anyway, that's where she went!

Homage, Velvet and Calamity returning? Didn't see that one coming! Especially glad for Homage, she is my second favorite pony ever (after Blackjack)!

Overall, awesome chapter, awesome fight, feels, and Drunkjack. What could we ask for more? Oh, right, Blackjack and Glory snuggling... Eh, hopefully we will get that in the next chapter... Wait, isn't the next chapter numbered 69?

Oh my...

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PS: I don't know if anybody had brought it up already, but during the past few weeks two rather... interesting drawings emerged on deviant art that I felt they should be mentioned here: this one and the one titled *link removed*. that I am not allowed to post here, apparently. Sorry! (Huh, that explains why those weren't mentioned earlier, I suppose...)

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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by RoboRed on Sun Aug 03, 2014 10:07 am

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Also, I'd suggest marking the previous one as "saucy" or "slightly NSFW" just for courtesy of others.

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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Retl on Sun Aug 03, 2014 10:20 am

O. Hinds wrote:
Somber wrote:The crown... why would it have four?!  She doesn't have that many holes!
...Please don't clarify that yet.  I want to see people's speculations.  :)

Four!? 

No wonder!
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Borsuq on Sun Aug 03, 2014 10:28 am

RoboRed wrote:Please don't post any R34/porn pics on the forum - it's against the rules. You are free, however, to PM it to any interested parties.

Also, I'd suggest marking the previous one as "saucy" or "slightly NSFW" just for courtesy of others.

Whops, didn't know that, sorry
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Vinylshadow on Sun Aug 03, 2014 12:39 pm

four holes?

one mouth...two nostrils...two ears

one between the legs, one beneath the tail...

plenty of holes that I can see
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion

Post by Scienza on Sun Aug 03, 2014 12:52 pm

I check the thread for the first time in forever and I'm now very intrigued by the discussion at hand.
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