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Post by Krashface Mon Jan 11, 2016 11:43 am

Prologue: A bad, bad night
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You know, I could make this story begin with "once upon a time, in a faraway magical land, there where a kingdom of ponies that lived in peace and harmony, and where everyone was happy and protected."
But instead, unfortunately,  I have to start in this way.

Once upon a time, not so much long ago, there where a kingdom that lived in a precarious state of false harmony, always on the brink of chaos and destruction by some megalomaniacal foe.
But to protect this delicate balance were four princesses and five heroic heroines, and more than once they managed to frighten the plans of their enemies.

One day of several years ago, an ancient necromancer threatened this balance ... and managed to destabilize it.
One of the princesses, the Princess of Friendship, was able to defeat this powerful enemy, but had to use a large amount of black magic.
And that brought her to what it is now.

In a year, she became the new threat of Equestria.
In five, she defeated the Princess of the sun, Celestia, and made her disappear into thin air.
In three, she founded a new empire, dark and violent.

And so began the Dark Ages of Equestria.
And our history.

The cold autumn night had fallen, and the moon was obscured by the leaden clouds.
In the castle which once heavenly towered on Canterlot and Ponyville, the tyrant of Equestria was going through troubled hours.
Her most trusted curators and guards were watching the removal of large crystals that had grown on some left ribs, too close to the lungs.
The tyrant was screaming in pain and struggling, while the covers of her bed were filled with blood, and crystal, violet as her floating mane, were removed, detaching even small parts of bone.

This tremendous event was not so rare, as someone may think.
A disease afflicted Equestria, after the Princess of the sun disappeared and Black Nova, once known as the Princess of friendship, had taken her role.
The crystallization.
The richest and most talented could slow the progression of the disease that afflicted them, but the poorest and the youngest could only groped to live with it until the crystals they had pierced their hearts... or until they decided to end it.
But this was a problem for those who lived in the kingdom of Nova.
Those who lived beyond the Everfree Forest, or simply in the cold Crystal Kingdom , had nothing to fear.

But now, it's better to retrace our steps.

Finally, after two long and painful hours, the curators had removed all the crystals, and the queen could finally rest, watched over by his guards.
Meanwhile, the curators had took the crystals to been examined by Ingenium Demens, the magician-inventor of the court, and the one in charge to find a cure for crystallization.

"Another bad night, I guess ." said Ingenium Demens, half asleep.
" No, worse ," said one of the curators, sounding tired and worried, " ten crystals on the left side ."
" For the Ancestor. The queen is getting worse ."
" By the way, we have the crystals. Here, take them ."

Ingenium took them between his hooves, and laid them on his desk.
He could not help but ask if what was attached on the crystals were pieces of bone.
The curators confirmed, and Ingenium passed a hoof on his forehead, puffing regretted. But now, it was too late for all, and said to the curators to leave.

Chapter one: On the what to do .
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Chapter three: the Gelid Horns .
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Chapter four: The battle for the Crystal Empire .
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On the day the attack, Nova received an urgent message from one of its best suppliers of weapons, Liquefied Gear, owner of 'Reformation Industry Prison of Tartarus (or RIPT) .

" Nova,
A prisoner has made a mess here!
Come now !
L.G. "


Nova rushed headlong, escorted by his guards, to the Tartarus.
The huge structure, built over a course of molten lava, was reduced badly .
Who or whatever had done this had to be an animal, a giant.
Or ... someone with a great magical power.
Once she had hits the ground of steel, a robot guard of the RIPT  escorted the queen to Liquefied Gear.
Now Nova remembered why she didn't want to see the new owner of that place of pain.
A earth pony burned all over his body, with a ridiculous wig in black and red stripes.

"Nova !" cried joyful Liquefied, " Thanks to the Ancestor, you arrived ."
" What happened ?" Asked Nova slightly worried.
" Well ... it's hard to explain ... but one of my prisoners has escaped ."
" What !?"

The scream of Nova echoed around the Tartarus, and an halo of darkness descended in the scorching structure, obscuring even the light of the lava.

" If you made escape who I think who is, I swear on my wings that I trow you into the lava !"
" No no! The special surveillance has not escaped !"

Nova breathed a sigh of relief, and the halo of darkness retreated.
Liquefied explained that the mysterious prisoner had to be into the depth, in some cell or even a whole abandoned and forgotten complex, not recorded or yet mentioned before the conversion of the Tartarus.
Certainly, the queen could not understand who could possibly be in the depths of Tartarus, or who was so capable of destroying an auger extraction heavy tons and at least ten meters high.

" Anyway, how are she ?" asked quietly Nova.
" Who ?" asked in response, distracted, Liquefied, " Oh, yeah... you know... we have strong problems to make her eat and drink, but otherwise it's always there."
"... put her down, then try to make her eat, let at the cost to give her liquid food ."
" Put her down ? But it is almost impossible to put down an alic- "

Nova soothed a magic ray, straight against Liquefied before he could even finish the sentence.
The prisoners, in their cells located around the main factory, began to laugh and shout for joy, and urged Nova to finish him .
The robotic guards, however, get on the alert and mobilized.
Liquefied, however, had gave them orders to not attack, and silence the prisoners.

" Next time I do what your brother did ."  said through clenched teeth Nova, a few centimeters from the muzzle of Liquefied.
" Sorry sorry sorry ! I was distracted !" said fast and terrified Liquefied conjuring Nova.
" Great. Now I have to..."

A letter from Opal Splinter appeared in front of Nova.
The letter said that the Crystal Empire was taken by the yaks and resistance, and that the losses were several .
The fury of Nova shook the Tartarus itself, while her scream almost blew the eardrums of all the presents .


Five hours earlier ...

The Yak had reached the Hoofs of Steel, who were stationed in the vicinity of the snowy Crystal Empire .
Pinkie reached Applejack, and waved "mission accomplished."
Finally, the two resistance groups could know each other .
Gorghonan said he was pleased to have meet Applejack, and the same was true for the mare.

" Yak ready to fight. Yak ready to die for the conquest of shiny Empire ." said in his deep, raspy voice Gorghonan.
" No one will die today, my friend ." said safe and heartening Applejack , " Today we officially begin the war against Black Nova ."
" Again ..." commented acid Iràscor.
" Shut up for a good time ." He said from above a cloud Rainbow Dash.

Again, Applejack re-explain the plan.

The changeling would have entered, disguised, inside the walls around the empire, and would have killed the guards who guarded the entrance, supported by the impending storm.
Meanwhile, the Hoofs and the yaks would take place outside the walls, ready to enter.
The Pegasi, instead, had to assault the possible airborne hazards.

So, once finished the summary, the assault began.
Iràscor and another thirty Changeling took the form of ponies, and mingled with travelers who were entering the city.
Once inside, they took refuge in the alleys of the city, and changed their aspect again .
The storm began on time, and so they went suddenly on the walls, killing the guards.
Once done, they gave the signal, and the rest of the resistance began the attack.
The yaks screamed like furies, and the other ponies of the Hoofs of Steel extracted their weapons, ready to fight.
Once inside, the real battle began.
The yaks struck with their heavy hammers and their hard hooves the soldiers of Nova, while the pony of Applejack impaled and struck with their swords and their clubs.
Suddenly, from above, they heard a lot of whistles. To make those, were the archers of Opal Splinter, with her in the forefront.
Many were taken by the arrows, and had to fight as best they could.
Then, the Pegasi and the changeling of the resistance attacked the archers.
The battle was now on two levels, and in both cases were real carnage.
Gradually, the resistance began to have the upper hoof, until the enemy troops retreated towards the inside quarters of the Empire, to the Crystal Tower.

" It is ours !" Shouted victorious and prancing Applejack, " We won !"
" Yak continue !" Shouted Gorhonan.

Applejack went against the head of the Glacial Horns, saying that the agreements were not those, but the big yak said that plans had changed.

" Yak offered to take the Crystal Empire, not small neighborhood ."
" But there are civilians ahead !"
" Then petty shiny civilians feel yak fury , if interfere !"

The yak moved Applejack giving her a strong shove, causing her to fall to the hoofs of Pinkie.
Then, the yaks took to charge, as they destroyed chariots and set fire to homes.
Applejack told everyone that it was better to follow the yaks and try to limit the damage of those barbarians.
Towards the center of the Empire, Opal Splinter and the remaining soldiers had built barricades for try to stop the advance of the resistance.

" It's alright, Opal, it's all right ." said to herself, stretched, Opal Splinter, trying to calm down, " Okay. Uh... soldiers, we must defend the Empire at any cost. W-we... we will not allow them conquer or kill us ."

The worried and not at all sure tone of Opal made only worsen the situation among the troops of the Empire.
Shortly after, the yaks destroyed the barricades and attacked the few remaining army of the Empire, who tried to resist as best he could .
The archers resumed their flight, and re-bombarded at their best the yaks, while the latter made shield with the corpses of fallen enemies.
Between a charge and another, the yaks managed to make their annoying enemies precipitate and end up their life.
Only one was not founded, Opal.

" Where shiny pegasus !?" yelled furious Gorghonan.

For make come out Opal, Gorghonan gave orders to some of his companions to set fire the neighboring houses, although there were civilians or not.
Those yaks seemed excited to do it.
Applejack, Rainbow Dash and Pinkie rushed in front of the yak, telling him to stop, and that now they had actually won and conquered most of what had been decided, but the yak kept saying he wanted the head of General Nova.
Then, Applejack slapped Gorghonan, and the latter took his hammer, ready to face Applejack and the other two, but didn't notice that Opal was upon him, with the bow drawn and ready to strike.
When the yak lifted up on his hind legs, Opal shot the arrow, which killed him instantly.
All yaks, then, tried to pull down the Pegasus, who was running away to the south, when a huge green beam struck her full, causing her to fall a little more distant from there .
Once arrived, they found the changelings, who were holding Opal, with Iràscor observing the other members of the resistance.
One of the Yaks began to move others at shoving, and went in front of Opal.

"You killed Gorghonan, winged ponies ." said coldly and with a deep anger in the body, " Now Olevir turns you into normal pony !"

The yak broke both wings of Opal, stomping them with all of his body weight, and making her cry out in pain.
The yak said she had to die, but Applejack said she didn't want to kill her, and that she could be a message to Nova.
So, after a long debate, they decided to let go Opal .
Outside the city, the poor general wrote a letter to Nova, informing her of the event .
Instead, inside the city, everyone began to pile and burn the dead, while the body of Gorghonan would return in Yakyakistan to be cremated with the proper funeral ceremony .
Appeljack was not, however, happy with what had happened.
She had underestimated the stubbornness and the thirst for war of the yaks, and this had brought more harm than good.
But Pinkie placed herself near her friend, as if trying to comfort her and not make her feel sadder .
At last, was a win, right ?


Last edited by Krashface on Mon Jan 11, 2016 12:05 pm; edited 5 times in total (Reason for editing : adding the chapters.)

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Post by Krashface Mon Jan 11, 2016 12:04 pm

Chapter five: Rragash amdar ferok, Ragenohger.
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Chapter six: Disgust and a brothel in the changelings land .
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Chapter seven: Surprise Attack.
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