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Post by Chaotic Dreams on Tue Apr 29, 2014 9:36 pm

Hello again. In addition to my story Fallout Equestria: Storm Chasers, I have recently resumed work on a fan fiction of mine entitled Obsolescence. I received some very useful feedback for Storm Chasers from this site, so I thought I'd see if anyone was interested in providing feedback for this tale as well. You can find this story here. 

The brief synopsis of the story is as follows: 
Under the bleak sky of a post-industrial Canterlot, a young mare named Neverwas ekes out a living through her knack for hacking computers. Her day-to-day existence is turned on its head, however, when she becomes entangled in a hidden war between the government and the megacorporations vying for control of the city.
In a world where cybernetics and genetic engineering, computerized dark magic and reality-altering conspiracies have long since displaced sunshine and rainbows, can one little pony hold onto her own life—and her own existence?

Additionally, here's the cover artwork, created by the masterful TheOmegaRidley: 

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Re: Obsolescence

Post by RoboRed on Fri May 02, 2014 11:04 am

I've been eyeballing this one a couple times, but I haven't read it.

Aonee wrote:
jacky2734 wrote:((Aonee, don't make me invent a way to punch you over the internet.))
((If you do, I will invent a Korean technique to block it with someone else's face. And, construct more pylons.))

CamoBadger wrote:((Wow, zebra incest is powerful shit))

Mister Frost's friend, "Darren" wrote:"I'm scared to break up with her, though. Her dad's an ex-marine; if I make her cry he'll club me over the head with a pillowcase full of doorknobs and Tom Clancy novels."

Sindri wrote:This is a thread for fans of a fanfiction of a fanfiction about murderous miniature pastel equines in a grimdark post-apocalyptic future.
If you wanted to stay anywhere near socially acceptable, you should have taken a left turn about three layers of WTF back.

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