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"Fall of a Queen" Editing...

Post by Admiral Stoic Rum on Wed Aug 07, 2013 10:22 pm

Hey there, I've been working with someone on a Fanfiction and was hoping some of you Grammar Nazis out there could lend a hand.

There was an issue of comma splices in this story which I believe were rectified in the most part. The issues of spelling and Caps have been for the most part corrected as well.

I am not really all that strong on the grammar front, and I would appreciate some help.

Here's the link to the GDOC

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SblEBBJeRwTkLVa_stE_PVD8msbfvsUAbuog-Dwq7vo/edit?usp=sharing
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